Wandering Through Time

by HieuDaoAdelaide, South Australia

Dec 2013 504 Views 9 comments

Wandering Through Time

My mind wanders and the truth it Falsified
Faking facts to fiction it twist and Bends
Blurring and tainting what is really Reality
Raising questions to my own Insanity
In times of doubt I follow the Trend
Traditions answers no longer satisfied

The hungry minds of modern Times
Thirsting for knowledge in a global Age
A quest for equality in over crowded Cities
Countries combine increasing Diversity
Differences accepted yet before bought Rage
Reckless decisions resulted in human Crimes

The Autumn leaves fall every year
As Winter snow slowly melts
Springs warmth brings life from what was bare
Summer heat withers a blooming health
The constant cycle of life

But have we learnt from mistakes of the past?

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Posted: Dec 2013

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sundayrose1san francisco, California USADec 23, 2013

Yes I would say, my dear poet. But maybe not as much as we should have. Although | can say, with the progress we have made since Christ was born when it comes to material and knowledge, I'd say we have learned so much.

May you have a warm holidays....and thanks for the read.

SR

mimzy333unknown, Washington USADec 24, 2013

the past always repeats its self just in diffrent places,times and people but the outcome is always the same. merry christmas

HieuDaoOPAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaJan 1, 2014

SR; thanks SR for reading and Don't think I've earn the title poet. But I totally agree that we haven't learnt as much as we should have. Thanks again and hope you had a great Christmas and new year.

HieuDaoOPAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaJan 1, 2014

Mimzy333; thanks for reading and commenting, so true. Hope you had a great Christmas and a happy new year.

madtat29Farmington, New Mexico USAFeb 6, 2014

Humans have a lot to learn...thanks for the trip...good write on a deep level

beautifulyouNew York, USAFeb 6, 2014

it seems, little by little we're learning and we change, however tacit, however subtle

ty for your sharing HieuDao

HieuDaoOPAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaFeb 18, 2014

Thanks for reading and commenting, the only problem is some people don't learn

ZenaS25Mystic, Delhi IndiaFeb 18, 2014

Truth is what we believe,
Though what we believed once
Does not exist forever.
People would always fake things, however..
New beginnings always brings a new chance.
So emotional burdens you feel, just relieve.

Crimes are the results of angry minds.
Hungerness of such kind is needed in modern times.
Our conscious guides us whenever it needs to,
Although we need to listen and follow when it do.
Sometimes all it takes to know, is the music from wind chimes.
Happy minds are free no inequality could make it bind.

Seasons would come, seasons would go,
And the beautiful morning sun would always shine.
Trends will change or it might not so,
But whenever a beautiful message you get, it's always divine.

Isn't it good to care for new beginnings then to dwell upon the past?

HieuDaoOPAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaMar 7, 2014

Truth is what we believe,
Though what we believed once
Does not exist forever.
People would always fake things, however..
New beginnings always brings a new chance.
So emotional burdens you feel, just relieve.

Truth is what we seek,
Yet lies and pain have scared me deep
These scars will last forever
So New beginning
So many hopeful chances
Yet most ended in pain.

Crimes are the results of angry minds.
Hungerness of such kind is needed in modern times.
Our conscious guides us whenever it needs to,
Although we need to listen and follow when it do.
Sometimes all it takes to know, is the music from wind chimes.
Happy minds are free no inequality could make it bind.

Greed corrupts and poison the mind
Yet you are right
It is needed in these modern times
But what if consciousness guides us the wrong way?
Do we follow and accept the crime?
Can't help but weep for the suffering of mankind

Seasons would come, seasons would go,
And the beautiful morning sun would always shine.
Trends will change or it might not so,
But whenever a beautiful message you get, it's always divine.

Seasons pass as fast as time
Thank you for your beautiful message
It is truly Devine

Isn't it good to care for new beginnings then to dwell upon the past?

Searching for that new beginning, so memories of the past can stop haunting me.

Thank you again, great write, beautiful message.

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