by HieuDaoAdelaide, South Australia
Dec 2013 426 Views 6 comments
A Sour Taste
Trusting my heart
Not seeing the pain
Blinded by desperation
Once drove me insane.
Haunted by scars
Memories of the past
Afraid opportunities passing
Decisions made in rush.
Falling too hastily
For lust yet not love
Karmas twisted pay back
A joke from above.
Denying the truth
So I taste the sorrow
Still foolishly hoping
For a better tomorrow.
The potion of love
Bittersweet I know
The poison of loneliness
Is killing my soul.
Not seeing the pain
Blinded by desperation
Once drove me insane.
Haunted by scars
Memories of the past
Afraid opportunities passing
Decisions made in rush.
Falling too hastily
For lust yet not love
Karmas twisted pay back
A joke from above.
Denying the truth
So I taste the sorrow
Still foolishly hoping
For a better tomorrow.
The potion of love
Bittersweet I know
The poison of loneliness
Is killing my soul.
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Posted: Dec 2013
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Comments (6)
Rob
Thank you for the read.
But it is what it is.
Happy holidays.
SR
Whether caused by Karmas twisted pay back or A joke from above A Sour Taste does convey well the emotional impact. I join the narrator in hoping For a better tomorrow. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you gnj for being on my side, but the wound always cut deeper with holidays in sight
Thanks DH for the lovely words, Really appreciate it.