My Life

by Joseph1112Brampton, Ontario, Canada

Apr 2014 618 Views 18 comments

My Life

Tis my life and so:
My heart the draw,
My head the thought,
My ears that caught,
My eyes that gawked,
My mouth that talked,
My feet that walked,
My hands that wrought,
And so at the end,
There will be no one to blame but me!
J.S.

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Posted: Apr 2014

About this poem:

One day every one of us will be judged by the Father for what we have done!

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Comments (18)

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainApr 3, 2014

Very true self judgement is a good thing, reminds me a little of my poem "Domain".
Rob

Joseph1112OPBrampton, Ontario CanadaApr 3, 2014

Thanks for your comment Rob! We must keep this in mind and behave accordingly!

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandApr 3, 2014

excellent picture drawn beautifully penned piece

beautifulyouNew York, USAApr 3, 2014

no doubt Joseph,
we are all responsible for what goes on within us and accordingly what we bring to others, whether that be expressions of love and joy or some form of hatred and bitterness.

thank you for sharing

Zeurichunknown, Utrecht NetherlandsApr 3, 2014

a touching one I like it.

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandApr 3, 2014

Hi Joseph

wonderful poem, enjoyed reading

Martina xxx

Joseph1112OPBrampton, Ontario CanadaApr 3, 2014

Thank you dark, beautiful, zurich and rapture I as always appreciate your input even sharing your understanding or take of what has been written. This is something I myself am working on remembering daily!

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAApr 4, 2014

I love the way you worded your poem. It's just beautiful !

Joseph1112OPBrampton, Ontario CanadaApr 4, 2014

Thanks again Girlygirl I always appreciate your kind comments hope you're doing ok now?

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAApr 4, 2014

Can I plead tempory insanity or maybe I was possessed for a few hours .

Joseph1112OPBrampton, Ontario CanadaApr 4, 2014

Haha yes you can absolutely. We all have those moments. You're gonna be fine...

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAApr 4, 2014

Lol thanks for the confidence. Honestly I prayed for Gods FORGIVNESS last night

Joseph1112OPBrampton, Ontario CanadaApr 4, 2014

And He said "I'll forgive you this time but never let it happen again right?",I'm kidding you've done nothing wrong we are only human He understands that... Anyways I should be sleeping, early mrng. Nice chat, goodnite friend!

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAApr 4, 2014

Good night to you my new friend

BajanshayBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosApr 4, 2014

Hi Joseph,
Nicely done. We really do need to be careful as there is power in the spoken word.

candykidAshburn, Virginia USAApr 4, 2014

Nicely constructed and what a wonderful message to wake up to about taking responsibility. ..

lindsyjonesunknown, California USAApr 5, 2014

How true it is Joseph, the Me and Myself syndrome of accepting the responsibility that only you, is the reason of all that happens to you..

Like my friend Rob, said, and I agree.. a very self judgmental write and who knows us more than ourselves..

Thanks Joseph

soulgoddessTokyo, Kanto JapanApr 9, 2014

Dear Joseph,

I like the consistency of your poetry and background color. It gives a sooth feeling to the reader throughout. You seemed at peace with yourself and God as well. I like the peaceful feeling when reading your poetry.

Keep writing!
Angeline

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