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Redemption
perhaps something
one must fight for
some lose
some stray
some regain it.

But sometimes
friends make mistakes
often grievous ones,

Ones that cry out
for us to stay
and prove we are true friends...
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Posted: Apr 2014
About this poem:
Just some thoughts I had...

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Comments (15)

darkhorse555
TRULY very beautifully drawn ken heartfelt pieceangel
trurorob
Wonder where those come from?, dont tell me let me guess!!, enjoyed the read Ken.
Rob
Girlygirl196349
REDEMPTION
PERHAPS SOMETHING
ONE MUST FIGHT FOR
SOME LOSE
SOME STRAY
SOME REGAIN IIT
THIS IS SO TRUE !!BEAUTIFUL POEM !! I REALLY ENJOYED READING IT ! HAS ME THINKING THANKS FOR SHARINGhug cheering angel
Spartacus2012
Thank you Liam!

Kenthanks
rapturecapture
Hi Ken

Haunting picture...very interesting poem

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxxhug angel wave
Odette67
But sometimes
friends make mistakes
often grievous ones,


Nice one ken, we all make mistakes, it is the human condition. applause purple heart
Spartacus2012
Hi Rob,
Thanks and cheers my friend..

Kencheers
Spartacus2012
Thank you Girly!

Kenrose
lindsyjones
I am fighting to regain my redemption Ken. from the pining of life..

Nice read my friend..thanks..

Phyllis
fjamesj9701
Really good stuff is my usual thing to say and I say it for lack of better words at times, so I say it again. Profound, depth, meaning, I dig it…CHeershandshake
fjamesj9701
Really good stuff is my usual thing to say and I say it for lack of better words at times, so I say it again. Profound, depth, meaning, I dig it…CHeershandshake
Spartacus2012
Thank you Martina for visiting!

Kenthanks flower
Spartacus2012
Thank you Crissie!

Kenrose very happy
Spartacus2012
Thank you dear friend Phyllis..Hope you are doing well..

Kenwriting rose
Spartacus2012
Thanks Jesse, always great to read from you..

Kentyping thanks
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