Good stuff as always , I enjoyed much.. Regards…Jesse
Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAMay 5, 2014
Nice poem
Hans4711Blayney, New South Wales AustraliaMay 5, 2014
@ benidorm - Very much a thought-provoking piece, Mate.... .... then again living in your city I would want to leave too before another shaker happens.... ....
Comments (9)
as i read your poem the imagery of a caterpillar clearly becoming a butterfly came to me
My poems inspired partly with experiences
and a song I heard recently.
Thank you so much.
This was all a illusion.
I have disappeared in to despair
and the ship has long departed.
Benni, a great write...But perhaps staying was for your choice and destiny. Don't worry, illusions sometimes are our best friend...
Thanks for the read
Imagination is a great escape
and writing is healing.
Worrying well that gets you nowhere.
Thanks for comment.