...Destination unknown......

I look to the sea

and see ships coming in.

Been coming here and sitting on the shore.

Wishing and thinking when can I go.

But what will I do.

Oh be so nice the change.

But my luggage its so heavy.

I best leave it as its not going to be

much use to me there.

The journey owe its so good to breathe in the salt air.

Be so nice with each breathe my pains to disappear.

I escaped your advice and sank into fear.

This was all a illusion.

I have disappeared in to despair

and the ship has long departed.

What will ever become is all in my court.

Who dares wins.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2014
About this poem:
Wish to just say.
Thanks for advice hope to implement
and show gratitude soon.

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candykid
I love the way you wrote this Reuben. I feel that this is a true story that you have put into a poem.thumbs up
beautifulyou
hi beni,
as i read your poem the imagery of a caterpillar clearly becoming a butterfly came to me


flower
benidorm
Candy

My poems inspired partly with experiences
and a song I heard recently.
benidorm
Beautiful you.
Thank you so much.
lindsyjonesonline today!
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This was all a illusion.

I have disappeared in to despair

and the ship has long departed.


Benni, a great write...But perhaps staying was for your choice and destiny. Don't worry, illusions sometimes are our best friend...

Thanks for the read
benidorm
Lyndsey

Imagination is a great escape
and writing is healing.
Worrying well that gets you nowhere.
Thanks for comment.
fjamesj9701
Good stuff as always , I enjoyed much.. Regards…Jessehandshake
Girlygirl196349
Nice poem hug cheering angel wave
Hans4711
@ benidorm - Very much a thought-provoking piece, Mate.... thumbs up .... then again living in your city I would want to leave too before another shaker happens.... blues .... grin cheers
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