Rhyming is the challenge

Here reading some of your precious poems,
However most are missing the rhyming prose!
Rhyming is the challenge to a poem indeed,
Yet parallel words have to rhyme and accede.

I can take your poems and use each and every word,
Sure I can rewrite your poems with a rhyming bond.
Take your time and rhyme your wonderful thought,
Give essence to your poetry and a comfort fraught.
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Posted: May 2014
About this poem:
Perhaps I am wrong but as a poetic ambassador,to me poetry is rhyming
New to this site, I just thought to give my two cents worth

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Rhyme_Less
James thank you for the reply and info.
Year 2007 I was nominated poetic ambassador...
The trick is to rhyme, and if it was that easy everyone would be a poet.
If I am to write poems like some of those I read here, I can publish two book a day... when I read the first stanza and there is no rhyme I will not read the second... I am not trying to be hard, honestly...
Songs are poems... can you sing any of those written here?
But when you hear a song there is rhyme, yes?
fjamesj9701
Most certainly they do and as I said I feel there should be a rhythm to any. I prefer the rhyme it sings clearly . I may have a few that don't rhyme I think. Someon just brought one of my older post to the front titled Belly that starts out without rhyme but surely fades into them . What is a poet ambassadors job? Im curious. Could you be the one I seek? Writing is certainly a passion of mine. Ill humbly take advice from any respective fellow writer. Don't be too hard on me nowlaugh
orientalkoru
handshake Welcome to the corner. I absolutely agree with you ... Rhyming is the challenge.. Or should be the challenge rather.... I'm a greenhorn... I can't write very well let alone construct a decent poem...I guess when I am trying to express myself I struggle and to put rhyming on top of that ...I will need to think very hard...that takes away the very reason I write: to relax and to unwind. The times I bothered to do that I somehow lose my flow of thoughts...and the emotion stifled! So I don't obsess myself with meters or rhymes..I've managed to write a sonnet or two I must say though and a few other forms but I just am not that good following rules I suppose. If I were to submit a poem to be reviewed or to compete... I might sit down and follow the rules. Tis the reason I come to this corner... I don't have to fit in to a set of norms or rules... I'm just here to enjoy a few minutes of therapy and bask in the safety and comfort of people I have not met but have become dear friends.rolling on the floor laughing

In saying all that there are published poets here...you'll soon come across them... But most of us beginners have adopted free verse... So you'll see a lot of it here. I hope our poetry doesn't scare you and I hope you'll have an enjoyable stay here at the corner handshake wine
Spartacus2012
Welcome to the corner..Here is some food for thought.

Rhyme is sometimes overused. When poems are built solely around forcing the rhyme, it makes for a poorly written and sounding poem. There are many different literary devices that make a poem exemplary besides or in addition to good rhyme.

On the positive side, many excellent poems have spectacular rhyme schemes. Rhyme has a undeniable place in the world of poetry. This is because rhyme is the easiest literary device for readers and listeners to understand. If a poem rhymes, the flow of the rhyme is immediately entertaining. In an attempt to catch their readers in the same way, some poets overuse or force rhymes which sacrifice the integrity of their poems..


Regards,

Ken
Rhyme_Less
orientalkoru all you have wrote here are what most of the poems are!!!
Yes there are exceptions and I love to read the poms of Joseph1112
Read his poems if you like
Rhyme_Less
fjamesj9701 to become ambassador they will give an article from the news paper and you have to turn it in to rhyming stanzas and or some kind of text to create a rhyming speech
reguiny2006
Hello, Poetry is the expression of our inner feeling, greatly assisted by rhyme, to make it flow and sing, however in French poetry there is often no rhyme at all, it is the flow and the musical content of the words phrasing that make it work, I will post on this site 'A play on rhyme', and look forward to your comment, regards, Phil.
trurorob
You have contradicted yourself here, there is no such thing as rhyming prose.
Its either rhyming poetry or free verse (prose).
To be honest I always rhymed and found it much more difficult to write in prose because I always looked for the rhyme. I feel that prose gives much more license to express the person as it allows the free flow of words without the restriction of searching for the rhyme.
It is a debatable point that will go on and on, I just find I can express my emotions greater with a freedom of words and to me as long as the flow is good and the subject well expressed then all is fine.
I feel you are missing out on some highly charged emotional expressions if you don't read more than a few lines.
You are entitled to your opinion and I respect that but it is modern times and all things change.
if you read the American Journal of Poetry there are many examples' of free verse prose are they wrong?.
Girlygirl196349
Beautifully stated rob!hug cheering angel
candykid
Thats right Rob. To settle this debate and find some type of conclusion, one must first determine the very definition of "poem."......Its is a highly subjective topic, and one that with all fairness, should not be defined.
Robs closing comment on his write "Languishing with Siberia" said it real well.
90% of my "poems" rhyme, but not every line. I will often rhyme the whole write up until the last line, as to put a thought provoking summation usually mandating a second read. But to suggest that you won't even finish reading a poem because of the lack of rhymes, is just silly. That should not be a foremost criteria for an "ambassador."
marikia
I agree, poetry implies rhyme and rhythm first and foremost. Both can be learned, no problem. There is also a free verse and everyone can indulge in it, no problem. But what's important in poem is a genius, a precious talent coming from above and given to few. True poetry, rhymed or free verse, is seldom found same as precious gem. Those who belong there are rare. Go to poetry giants and you will find it there. We are here not to impress with technique but to convey feelings and make friends with others. I have come across good poets here, whose writings I like, but most of us are people looking for companionship of any kind. No poetic form or achievement in poetry line compare with what many of us find here. Good you raised this issue, for we are short of technique, and it is always good to learn, but for many of us, plagued with monopathy, this corner is more than just poetry: it is a place like no other places, where we know we are always welcome! Thank you, dear poet, for your concern! hug
Girlygirl196349
Marikia I couldn't have said it any better if I wrote it myself we have the most supportive people I know.this site has saved me .they all welcomed me in .I'm a novice started after some coaxing I'm sure you could drag me through the coals but what would that geat you? it's very rude of you to pick joseph out of all the poets and praise only him Joseph is very loyal kind hearted man.he is a beautiful poet but more importantly he's an awesome guy which makes him an awesome friend!,, maye you could learn a few things on here we wtite what we feel and we all pull together and praise eachothers poems it's not a contest here.it's a family l pray it stays that way no back stabing eachother !,,,
Rhyme_Less
I am so glad I started this debate...

Girly first of all I am 2 days old in this site... how many poems could I read or is it my only job?
I read 6-7 different poets and I came across the poems written by Joseph1112, where I saw the rhyming, therefore if I only see it on Joseph how can I praise Mary.
Perhaps the owner of this site should add another tub and call it expressions of the soul or some other instead of poetry.
marikia
Poetry is in fact "expressions of the soul," so there's no need for opening other tub or tubs. Kindest regards! wine
Hans4711
@ Rhyme_Less - First of all let me welcome you to this site... cswelcome .. Secondly, I have only ever written two poems in my life (so far) but you are most welcome to read them and share any constructive criticism that you could offer... grin cheers
Girlygirl196349
Apotent t Im not!!! But I will tell you this and I picked up your snide remark from your last message !!! I WILL CONTINUE TO WRITE AND EXPRESS MY FEELINGS HERE UNTIL SOMBODY THAT I KNOW AND RESPECTS ASKS ME NOT TOO! So that said feel free to call connecting singles and see if theywill open another corner for people like me!!!!daisy daisy
Girlygirl196349
A poet I'm not but... Typo o I'm on my I pad
Rhyme_Less
Girlygirl196349
Hold on to your horse, don't fall...
This is a place like any bloody mall.
From 20 dollars snickers or $30 dress,
To few hundred if need or must impress.

I am not trying to impress anyone...
Much less impress you, and everyone.
I Know what rhyme and poetry should be,
I've offer only my opinion and the key.

Thank you
Rhyme_Less
Girlygirl196349
Hold on to your horse, don't fall...
This is a place like any bloody mall.
From 20 dollars snickers or $30 dress,
To few hundred if need or must impress.

I am not trying to impress anyone...
Much less impress you, and everyone.
I Know what rhyme and poetry should be,
I've offered only my opinion and the key.

Thank you
Odette67
Whatever style of poetry a poet chooses is a matter of choice.

Not all poetry rhymes -

It’s common to hear readers criticize poems that don’t rhyme, suggesting, perhaps, that the poets concerned were insufficiently skilled. But a great deal of poetry in the English language doesn’t employ rhyme. Blank verse, for example –by definition unrhymed – was a form of poetry often favoured by Milton, Shakespeare, Wordsworth, Keats and Tennyson amongst many others.
Rhyming isn’t for everyone. Our poems are unique and a reflection of ourselves. Our lives don’t follow flawless patterns, and our poetry doesn’t have to either.

I myself like the free flow of words in free verse, it is a matter of taste, I guess I'm rather lazy when it comes to what rhymes with what.

Though I do love to read rhyming poetry. We don't pretend to be serious poets here in the corner.
Girlygirl196349
You don't nor could you impress me !!! I don't impress so easily and surely a poem isnt gonna cut it!!! Kinda funny how you wont comment on the other men's comments thats okay!! You can't bully me even If you tried!!!! Takes a lot to scare me off and certainly some egotistical guy isn't gonna run me off! and yes I have class you don't acquire it you have it or you DON'T someone is pretending to have it Lol As for my dresses yes they come from a fine depertament store which I'm sure you know nothing of!!!!!

daisy Your a daisy if you do!!!daisy
Rhyme_Less
When we are missing patience and or the skills we create new rules.
I can rhyme all of my speech because I have the skills

I am not entertaining this any longer. My God...
Rhyme_Less
No comment daisysad flower
Happygolucky4u
Rhyming is the challenge
Author: Rhyme_Less
Here reading some of your precious poems,
However most are missing the rhyming prose!
Rhyming is the challenge to a poem indeed,
Yet parallel words have to rhyme and accede.

I can take your poems and use each and every word,
Sure I can rewrite your poems with a rhyming bond.
Take your time and rhyme your wonderful thought,
Give essence to your poetry and a comfort fraught.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~


Posted: Mon May 5, 2014 9:54 PM EST

About this poem:
Perhaps I am wrong but as a poetic ambassador,to me poetry is rhyming
New to this site, I just thought to give my two cents worth

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Nope nope nope I would venture to say you are right. To you poetry is rhyming
And good for you if you are content on settling for the crust and not the whole pie. There is so much to poetry. Rhyming is used in certain forms of poetry not all. But I would gather you are not interested in the other forms and prefer the rhymes. Your two cents worth has created quite a stir I see

uh oh I do hope that we all can just move on from this and see it for what it is. An opinion, a preference, not a fact laugh I must say I thought when I read the title that maybe we were going to have a fun challenge like the many that I have seen done on here. I am disappointed. I also like to rhyme. And thought maybe I would enter. Now I think I will just exit this area of discontent. sigh
SCatlyn
'I can rhyme all of my speech because I have the skills' -
It appears you definitely have the skills for rhyming and poetry...

but the ambassador part..........

Happy is very wise by the way - she's one of the most diplomatic people I've ever come across(and she can write poetry, as well) She was looking forward to learning more you...

If you would try learning some diplomatic skills from her... then you could both benefit, and from there a great ripple effect.

p.s.Just wondering how you decided on your screen name(cuz at first it seemed ironic - like people should rhyme less, but you've said people should rhyme more... I suppose it's obvious to others- I just catch on slower than most...)
SCatlyn
learning *from you
fjamesj9701
The ambassador has spoken our poems are unworthycheers
SCatlyn
'The ambassador has spoken our poems are unworthy cheers'

Thanks for the laugh fjamesj! Love it!! rolling on the floor laughing
Rhyme_Less
Rhyming is yes a challenge but also what is poetry for those who have the skills.
If you take the time to rhyme you will love the expression of your art... as poetry is an art.
I wish everyone to stop arguing with me and it is the reason people do not read poetry anymore... and my reason I post no more.
Only those who have limited ego will agree.
Rhyme_Less
Or maybe I post few more of my work
Rhyme_Less
Or maybe I post few more of my work
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