Listening rythmics of our pulsses We dissolved early passion spring Discovering the world of tenderest joy And the breath of life You're given me I given you Inspires thoughts of hopes Thrust bounded My all in you You're all in me Our pleasure bear in flame of faith In letters we have spent with thy heart ruped inside And every day we both admit Growing love that dreams to never die Treasuring every moment in a sweet unrest We're collecting full basket of little fairy kisses blossoming in white and red Waiting each day my setting moon And your rising day To send a flash of another shining star
I touche'd you not You touch'd me not And yet tender voice of ectasy we both touch'd Vision of Gordian knot,beauty's angel within senses That makes distance between us disapier As kindness,truth,thrust pleas'd soul Were virtue seeing The sweetest Cupid in the gracious love Honouring thee awake for ever
Come live with me Be my melodius birds Be my nectar in the morning,and I shell be yours A cup of flowers that delights thy mind In union that sees blessing of life Where the fear shall not alter Thouth of your or my heart to be broken As heart can not forget an amulet worn in soul and mind Feeding from each other stingth of faith Sweet,sweet trembled that shakes Heaven And like artist we add in each day new collar We paint our visions Brightly expressive Enwrapped riddle with a sweet emotion In one spirit mingles
And if tomorrow I die before you Let it be in your arms content With last words Whipers That dream of us To thank you for all you given me On a bed of rainbow sky Dancing in tune with you Till faint in your light
And if tomorrow I die before you Do not grieve, do not sing sad songs for me As love will always live Tresure twiligh in your eyes
123whisperOPMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaMay 22, 2014
dear Mrs Redex;thank you very much for kind comment.I thought a bit about music while writing it;you read my mind,thank you.
123whisperOPMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaMay 22, 2014
dearst freind lindsyjones;thank you very much for kind comment. I think we both have the same idea of looking at love as never ending;it's beautiful thought that after our existence we left the mark to care for well being of partner to live with sense of peace and continue to carry on that love for life,love to love... Love you
123whisperOPMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaMay 22, 2014
candykid;thank you for very kind comment You're right; there are very strong emotions as that's the way I percieve thrue love for one another
Splendid write sister, 123whisper powerful. "Come live with me be my melodious birds be my nectar in the morning, and I shall be yours...in one spirit mingles" awesome sentiments expressed! J
123whisperOPMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaMay 23, 2014
Mr Joseph;thank you for very kind comment. God bless all people who share warmth of love
Primrose30south, Xlokk MaltaMay 23, 2014
Thanks for share this beautiful words of love specialy
And if tomorrow I die before you Do not grieve, do not sing sad songs for me As love will always live Tresure twiligh in your eyes
Wish the world be thinging of each other as one, with love so true. and save their love till the end
When my dad knows that he was going to die of 80years, he turn to my mom whilst he cuddle her for the last time, he said dear I am so sorry that I am going to leave you, and he wisper in my ears said the last wards to me , look after your mom for me. I keep remember those loving words and carring them all my life. they were 60 years married
123whisperOPMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaMay 23, 2014
Miss Primerose;you touched me deeply with your parents love relation and you're the beautiful seed blossom into beautiful flower of that very divine love that you carry like a crown pass on to you to live by the same dreams. Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful family story and I am sorry for your loss Remember;spirit of your dad - will always live in your pulse's beat where love continues as reflection in mirror of your parents love,as thy breath to life that is blessed with wonderful love experience Thank you for kind comment.
Yes my dear friend. The love that will not die. Forever entwined in our being. A mark to stand on its own, even as the flame died down.
That is because love is love is love my friend..and has mind all its own..
Love you, too my dearest friend..
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMay 23, 2014
I do love the imagery you have painted in this one Whisper. Its something that I like and you did well to convey your feelings here. Thanks for the pleasure of this read and its time eat your vegetables...doctors orders.
123whisperOPMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaMay 23, 2014
my dearest friend lindsyjones;it's wodnerful pleasure to have you around. Thank you for sharing the spirit of heavenly ecstasies of love wonder Love always,Thea
123whisperOPMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaMay 23, 2014
Mr Poetnumber1;thank you for honouring me with your presence Doctor with vegetables I am wondering; how did you know that I really don't eat enough vegetables;and after reading your comment I've rushed to check my image in mirrir to see if there is something that can tell I am missing vegies,loll or is that can be read in between the lines of my poem Thank you for making me laugh and I greatly appreciate your very kind comment Thea
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my favourite is the 2nd to last stanza, especially..
'Till faint in your light'
very nice
You're picked up 2nd part that is my favourite too
Do not grieve, do not sing sad songs for me
As love will always live
Tresure twilight in your eyes
A very positive note upon a love that knows no end my dearest darling friend.
You took all the words off my mouth on this beautiful testament of a very deep and soulful love.
Love you my friend..
I think we both have the same idea of looking at love as never ending;it's beautiful thought that after our existence we left the mark to care for well being of partner to live with sense of peace and continue to carry on that love for life,love to love...
Love you
God bless all people who share warmth of love
And if tomorrow I die before you
Do not grieve, do not sing sad songs for me
As love will always live
Tresure twiligh in your eyes
Wish the world be thinging of each other as one, with love so true. and save their love till the end
When my dad knows that he was going to die of 80years, he turn to my mom whilst he cuddle her for the last time, he said dear I am so sorry that I am going to leave you, and he wisper in my ears said the last wards to me , look after your mom for me.
I keep remember those loving words and carring them all my life. they were 60 years married
Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful family story and I am sorry for your loss
Remember;spirit of your dad - will always live in your pulse's beat where love continues as reflection in mirror of your parents love,as thy breath to life that is blessed with wonderful love experience Thank you for kind comment.
That is because love is love is love my friend..and has mind all its own..
Love you, too my dearest friend..
Thank you for sharing the spirit of heavenly ecstasies of love wonder
Love always,Thea
Thank you for making me laugh and I greatly appreciate your very kind comment Thea