Driving in my thoughts

In front of the stearing weal,
I am driving alone,driving slow at night time;
moonlight shining on deserted Melbourne road
with few cars passing by,
and in the world of thoughts,
I am taking different road,
different dream,different life...
Looking at the door that has never been opened
and makes me wonder;
"What it could be and what would be
if I could ever open that door?"
In kissing apstraction
I opened door of our past that never happaned,
I sow our children playing and laughing with us
in garden of roses.
He's words makes Eho's in my spirit
'What an wonderful life we could have if we met in our youth'
I am driving in my thoughts,
on the road of life or world of dream,
I'am smiling to myself,
thinking of him...
Smiling at Apstract dream of unknown past,
joining roots in present time to met future time,
constracted from present dream,desires,longing,
all met together in one...
Dream of desired thee,
dream of us,
pointing towards our present pulse's beat,
thy breath to life we give to each other,
filling silent distance with creative apstractions
that gloom of earth's possibilities...
Walking to the door that is open to us,
To greet thee,
Looking at the stars we met
miles apart
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Posted: May 2014

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Girlygirl196349
Very nice I enjoyed reading thisteddybear cheering angel wave
sevenseasredwine
He's words makes Eho's in my spirit
'What an wonderful life we could have if we met in our youth'

very nice description,very beautiful thought and nicest expression of deepest kin
d of love.
Mizzy4online now!
Very romantic Thea,
Lovely thoughts.....
Mick.

angel
gnj4u
Hi, 123whisper,
I love the image of life's roots joining past and present to a future time. Looking at the door that has never been opened... Oh, how could one not delight in the possibilities? Thanks for sharing the poetic experience of Driving in my thoughts...smiling to myself...
Poetnumber1
Very lovely Thea. Your words echo a familiar beauty that transcends that of a mere dream on the script of one's mind. ''Smiling abstract dream of unknown past'' compliments the comely picture painted here that nourishes the reader's mind. Loved it...cheers wine
Joseph1112
Absolutely glorious painting you've drawn dear sister Thea of love, our strongest passion, and this line," smiling at abstract dream of unknown past joining roots in present time to meet future time,,,dream, desires longing, all met together in one... Dream of desired thee, dream of us, sums it all up perfectly! J thank u, peace and joy..applause hug bouquet
cafetwo2010
You inspired me to take this drive with
you dear. I think about opening a few
doors that have been shut to long.
Cafe
Spartacus2012
Stellar romantic write..I enjoyed perusing this oneen..

Regards,

Kentip hat
123whisper
Girlygirl'greatly apprecite your kind commenthug teddybear
123whisper
sevenseasradwine;greatly apprecaite your kind comment.wine
This poem is about forever wonder what it could be if we opened different doors in our past or present life -would things be like in our dreams or would it take unexpected turns, that's what we never know and this abstract thoughts some times plays tricks with our mind as the only reality we have is how creative we are in present time. Thank you for taking time reading my Poemsteddybear
123whisper
Dear friend Mick;greatly apprecite your kind commentwine
I enjoy to read your romantic poemsteddybear
123whisper
gnj4u;I am very touched with your kind comment,thank youwine Looking at nameless possibilities is optimisitic wonder to our hopes and dreams that gives us zest of life inspiration and moves us forward with confidencehug teddybear
123whisper
Poetnumber1;always greatly apprecite your kind comment with elaboration that sinks deep into very heart of given points,thank youhug teddybear
123whisper
Peace and joy brother Joseph;thank you for much apprecitive kind comment wine Love your expresive entusiasm that relfects in your poetry toocheering Theateddybear
123whisper
cafetwo;greatly appreciate your kind commentwine
I think on Poets cone we all tend to inspire each other by planting seeds where thoughts growing into plant and breanches of that three can take different shape of given ideas - thinking outsidie the box of our space...In our thoughts when we look from distance each person we see may inspire something mystical which looks as secretive happy dream but under the surface we never know what we find wink Thank you teddybear
123whisper
Dear Ken;lovely to see you around,thank you for kind commentteddybear
reguiny2006
Hello, I like what you haven't writen but powerfully suggested. Phil.
morgen90210
what an extract by itself ....smashing success ....worthy by itself .......
lindsyjonesonline today!
A most epic write my friend.

Thanks
123whisper
Dear requine (Phill);I am impress with your comment about "liking what I didn't wrote but suggested" idea and yes you hit the nail in right direction wine Thank you for kind commentteddybear
123whisper
morgen;greatly apprecite your very kind comment tip hat teddybear
123whisper
my dear lindsyjones;greatly apprecite to see you around and thank you for kind commpliment. Hope everything is going well with your health;
always praying for youhugLove you,Thea teddybear
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