Many love well,thought they faith may fancy see; Beauty that deceives the eye; Idle love of smocked dreams in farry land; Greedy love looking for safty of others care; They all err; But when Cupid kindness of the soul crown and blessing in highest grace regard it, is given to ungreatful heart Wealth of beauty soul becomes only foolish gift of dimond thrown to the blind and thy heart depart; as to thous who can't give thy heart every day, never thruly gave it in the bargain made they meant true judging body beauty or the solid panny when doesn't met they're expectation of wealth
Love without fears who doesn't measure words as medicine leaves a bit of bitter taste of lemon in the mouth but for thous who can make lemonade of life they have the greatest telent to have all thee of gracious love within as the humble love for itself grows like flowers that gives life power blessing to multiply thousand times to be shared around and bring burds to spring of soul
There is no winner in this love riddle except for thous which two hands holds with each other with faith to listen beating hearts in spite of death to hold the secret of the stars of purest and sweetest kiss to the rad rose breathes Eternity.
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Posted: May 2014
About this poem:
Poem about general thought of what love is to different people but true love never fails,always forgives and last to Eternity
A Nicely written and expressed piece Miss Whisper. I enjoyed it thoroughly …Jesse
123whisperOPMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaMay 7, 2014
fjames;when I get kind comment from excelent writers of poetry I fill honoured that people as yourself took time to read what I began writing with first todler steps of poetry skill ... Greatly apprecite your very kind comment.thank you
Well I must say that I am humbled by your return comment Miss Whisper,I thought I was just scribbling words on a piece of paper lol I believe you have a talent you may not see as I do. Its in your mechanics…Jesse
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMay 7, 2014
''Partial love shall always fail'', I concur with truthful statement Whisper. I had to read this a second time because I thought this was very meaningful in its essence and beautifully expressed. Loved it and the footnote to!
123whisperOPMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaMay 7, 2014
fjamsiy;appreciate your very kind comment,thank you.You're writting is much more than just scrible and there is a sevaral people hear as youself which poetry I find excelent -inspirational and enjoy to read very much Thank you
123whisperOPMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaMay 7, 2014
Poetnumber1;another wonderful Poet to honour me by stoping by Thank you for kind comment and I fill a bit confused with "footnote" to give me more insite what I missed !? I like constractive chriticism to learn from
Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAMay 11, 2014
Beautiful
123whisperOPMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaMay 12, 2014
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Greatly apprecite your very kind comment.thank you
Enjoyed much........Mick.
I like constractive chriticism to learn from