Entangled in self

The one who has to be born,
He already exist in the world,
and he will be tight up on Earth
tired and old.
And we will kill him,
but very slow,
with refine torture,
to stop loving us,
to take away our hopes,
to see that in all our experiences of
Cataclysm's
Life mud is up to neck,
and we can't get out of mud
until last farewell is said
To our yesterday mistakes.

We are often victims of our own entangled
Misfortune.
Who is stealing my keys to unlock the door of my fortune?
And death is strangling us around neck,in our mind,
in fears,crazy -passion,
Entangling in self we fall victims
To see hook for hanging
In it's own desires.

Oh dream,sweet dreams
also caries lunatic in his brilliance;
Dream of undying Love,
Dream of undying Loyalty,
doesn't always find man in Man strong
To carry out what he wish for
In another.

Yesterday mistakes
some times gets knitted in present
when awakening old wound,
Self sacrifices also discovers Selfish reasons,
To remind us of our highest position
in the lowest scores...

Don't give yourself fully,
don't attached yourself to things,
you will find the death of feelings in Pain.

Who is walking with me at night like shadow?
Does man carry self in himself to win his awakening?
Much selfishness is entangled with old sorrow that cries;
To run free...
To be understood,to be comforted with care,
But dark is stronger when given week hand.
And perhaps the only hand we need stronger,
Is our own,in balanced thoughts
Flushed with sun,
Accepting our-self,
And find reason - without reason to laugh,
When getting dirty in mud.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jul 2014
About this poem:
Tribute to friend - lost in blindness of judgmental views.
The one who has to be born already exist in the world of our own image in the mirror and we kill him slowly with loads of accumulated baggages of past cataclysm's that we need to free ourselves from if we want to be re-born again as new man. To keep healthy balance of thoughts it's best not to take ourselves too seriously...and laugh as much we can when getting dirty in life mud.

Also thank you to Poetnumber1 for generous given comfort with much appreciated wisdom.

Thank you all for taking time in reading.

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lindsyjonesonline today!
Just deep my beautiful friend. I thought at first was about Jesus, then the note made it all clear.

Very profound write my friend.

Love you Thea.
bungallow55
whisper

glad you're back...your poem made me asked myself

that unfamous question...why are we here anyway?

deep thinking indeed.wave
123whisper
dearest friend lindsyjones;thank you for much kind comment.
Love youteddybear
sevenseasredwine
Very touching love poem and every word you said and you wrote, went straight into heart and I love this poem very much and I wish to see smile on your face.
Mizzy4
Thea this is just a special poem !
Such wisdom and love......
Beautiful !!!!!!

Regards Mick.

tip hat writing daisy
mimzy333
very insightful and full of wisdom in this poem
candykid
Whisper .......I love to see you pour out your unique thoughts.
mcradloff
I remember hearing a professor say that our greatest asset will be our sense of humor. I have accumulated quite a pile of comedy and I enjoy getting outside myself and laughing at these comedians that remind me daily to laugh and I appreciate them so much, Will Ferrell, George Carlin, Sam Kinison, to name just a few.rolling on the floor laughing
123whisper
dear sevenseasradwine;thank you for very kind comment that is greatly appreciated and broth smile to me ...hug Theateddybear
123whisper
Mizzy (Mick);greatly appreciate wonderful comment -Thank you hug Theateddybear
123whisper
dear Mimmzy;I am touched with your very kind comment,thank you hug Theateddybear
123whisper
dear friend candykid;lovely to see you around and much appreciate your always kind commenthug Thank youteddybear
Poetnumber1
That will cost you next weeks salary and a cup of coffee. laugh Seriously its a pleasure always Thea. I loved perusing this one because it shows once more how you're gifted with the ability to relay your thoughts in a beautiful way. hug
123whisper
Mcradloff;yes,sense of humour is our greatest talent to see reality from funny side and when disaster happens and you laugh at yourself while at the edge of cry - some may call it lunatic laugh laugh and some could call it wise laugh but laugh anywaywink Thank you for much appreciated commentteddybear
candykid
M.M.....rolling on the floor laughing

Whisper you rock dearest friend. ....
123whisper
Poetnumber1;with my salary I can bay you coffe laugh It's wonderful to find great poet and friend in one;and thank you for understanding and very kind encouraging commenthug greatly appreciate teddybear -Thea
123whisper
dear candykid;what keeps me on this Poet cone is people like you who are very encauraging of others and thank you for showing great example 'to rock'wink teddybear
Poetnumber1
No give me your salary and I will loan you some money to buy a cup of coffee for yourself. I am only being generous today. You know how hard you had to work for that money this week so I will definitely put it in the M.M,s international bank so you wouldn't have to spend a cent. laugh
Mizzy4
Thea........I forgot to say ,
Thankfully you didn't stay away
for too long !
Mick.

cheering
fjamesj9701
Sometimes my dear hunger is the only kind of food. I enjoyed theses verses much. Entangled. Nice work my Dearest Miss Whisper. Cheers and much love … Jessewine
123whisper
Mizzy(Mick);that's very kind of you to welcome my return to Poet cone,much appreciate your kind attention wine It's hard to stay away for too long as I found in poet cone wonderful warm home of extraordinary taleneted Poets as yourself and as well supportive friends.wine Happy to seee you around...teddybear
123whisper
fjamess(Jesse); dear friend I am honoured you stop by and thank you for kind comment. wineI was expecting that true this poem you will recognise something familiar related to your own subject & style of witing,as much we are individualy all very different unique. Thank you dear Jesse wave -Theateddybear
trurorob
Lot of truth expressed here my friend.
Rob
123whisper
Hello dear Mr Rob,thank you for very kind coment.We all see the truth from some different angle ...as well it's universal one wine Theateddybear
ckxykelvin
you have a unique style of writing. It's refreshing. Thanks!
123whisper
ckxykelvin;thank you for kind comment.wine
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