Holding to dreams

You and I exist as butterfly of dream
As bird of fate and promised spring
where only voice and words can reach us
In dream and wind we try to find the way to touch
For the kiss to conquer it seams like a fare away star
Shiver at the distance full of laughter
Mysterious
Impenetrable like the sea
We're discovering each other every day
Inch by inch
Renewing ancient old tile of thy loneliness being apart,
In persistent pain
with lingering embraces of old love and joys
Tears
Fire
Longing
Hunting a vision fleeting in rhyme
Played from millions of others
In numberless forms
Old love of all time reborn again
In words uttered in poems
Embroidered jewels round our heart
with our tears of sorrow and happiness mixed all in one
Enwrapped soul given and taken as a gift -purchase thee
holds a treasure of growth
And our heart knows no rest
As for lovers who wait for each other
Time is endless in holding to dreams
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Posted: Aug 2014
About this poem:
“Do not lose hold of your dreams or aspirations. For if you do, you may still exist but you have ceased to live.”
? Henry David Thoreau

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Odette67
Hunting a vision fleeting in rhyme
Played from millions of others
In numberless forms
Old love of all time reborn again
In words uttered in poems,


Dear Thea,
What stunningly beautiful poem, I happened to read that quote just the other day. Thank you for sharing. hug purple heart
123whisper
Dear Oddete;thank you for very kind comment;greatly apprecite it.wineKind regards,Thea teddybear
darkhorse555
beautifully painted excellent piece really loved the visions you sketch thea angel wine
Mizzy4
Dear Thea,
This is such a beautiful poem,
Filled with both wisdom and love....
Superb write !!!

Kind regards Mick.

applause cheering angel
123whisper
Dear Poet darkhorse(Liam);greatly appreciate your very kind comment;thank you dear friendwine Kind regards,Theateddybear
123whisper
Dear Mizzy4 (Mick);thank you for always giving kind positive feed back;greatly apprecite dear friend.wine
Kind regards,Thea teddybear
ImagineLove
It is hard to comment on this write Whisper, as my feelings are somewhere over the moon and words fail me, I am just at peace smiling at the beauty of thoughts penned! "time is endless in holding to dreams" hug
123whisper
ImagineLove;It is hard to comment on this write Whisper, as my feelings are somewhere over the moon and words fail me, I am just at peace smiling at the beauty of thoughts penned! "time is endless in holding to dreams" hug

Dear ImagineLove;greatly appreciate your very kind comment;thank youteddybear
redwinebluesky
morvelous,fantastic description of love in nicest way
peachmelba
Beautiful poem whisper you write in images I can see in my mind ,,your word are so vivid like giving a picture...well done.wine
123whisper
dear radwinebluesky;thank you very much for positive feed back comment;greatly apprecite itwine teddybear
sevenseasredwine
holds a treasure of growth
And our heart knows no rest
As for lovers who wait for each other
Time is endless in holding to dreams

very nice poem
123whisper
Dear sevenseasredwine;greatly apprecite your kind commentwine
Thank you.
I like to share the quote I like;
"In love you must... Risk more than others think is safe. Care more than others think is wise. Dream more than others think is practical. Expect more than others think is possible."
Kendra Brown teddybear
P.S. The most true "love" poetry create a vision of utopia, a sense of perfection,while in reality, true love isn't about perfection, but rather imperfection.
Kind regards,Thea
paloma66
Lovely poem whusper,beautiful thoughts.Loved these two lines...
You and I exist as butterfly of dream
As bird of fate and promised spring.thumbs up hug bouquet
123whisper
dear Ms Paloma;thank you for stoping by and greatly appreciate your kind comment.
No heart has ever suffered when it goes in search of its dreams, because every second of search is a second’s encounter with God and with eternity.
Kind regards,Theateddybear
Poetnumber1
Very well written Thea. You transport me to a different place with your beautiful imagery and with the tapestry of emotions penned. Enjoyed this very much.
123whisper
Dear friend Poetnumber1;very sweet comment;greatly appreciate it wine teddybear
candykid
A very beautiful choice of words dear Thea.
123whisper
Dear candykind;greatly apprecite you stop by to take time reading my poem,thank you for kind comment and it's lovely to see you around poet corner still writing wine teddybear hug
Fellsman
Hi Thea

Quite beautiful, you have the soul of a true poet!

Kindest regards

Bill gift wine
123whisper
Mr Fellsman;I am truly feeling flettered and greatful for your great comliment of being true poet -this kind complinet mean more to me than if men tells me 'how good I am looking'etc. laugh
Thank you::wine: teddybear
sevenseasredwine
holds a treasure of growth
And our heart knows no rest
As for lovers who wait for each other
Time is endless in holding to dreams

wonderful and most touching piece of poetry
123whisper
sevenseasredwine;greatly apprecite your very kind comment.
I extend myself true words instead of fingers, or fingers at the tip of my words and language wants to become a skin that is dreaming of reality wink laugh teddybear
tauntedhumor
Very beautiful with so much grace
beautifulyou
this is very beautiful whisper

..just incredibly lovely! ty bouquet
theCrane
I've read this and a few other of your poems.. and I have to say that they are all inspiring. Lovely poetry really.. I hope you keep posting more.- Gabriel.heart wings
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