You and I exist as butterfly of dream As bird of fate and promised spring where only voice and words can reach us In dream and wind we try to find the way to touch For the kiss to conquer it seams like a fare away star Shiver at the distance full of laughter Mysterious Impenetrable like the sea We're discovering each other every day Inch by inch Renewing ancient old tile of thy loneliness being apart, In persistent pain with lingering embraces of old love and joys Tears Fire Longing Hunting a vision fleeting in rhyme Played from millions of others In numberless forms Old love of all time reborn again In words uttered in poems Embroidered jewels round our heart with our tears of sorrow and happiness mixed all in one Enwrapped soul given and taken as a gift -purchase thee holds a treasure of growth And our heart knows no rest As for lovers who wait for each other Time is endless in holding to dreams
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Posted: Aug 2014
About this poem:
“Do not lose hold of your dreams or aspirations. For if you do, you may still exist but you have ceased to live.” ? Henry David Thoreau
Dear Thea, This is such a beautiful poem, Filled with both wisdom and love.... Superb write !!!
Kind regards Mick.
123whisperOPMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaAug 19, 2014
Dear Poet darkhorse(Liam);greatly appreciate your very kind comment;thank you dear friend Kind regards,Thea
123whisperOPMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaAug 19, 2014
Dear Mizzy4 (Mick);thank you for always giving kind positive feed back;greatly apprecite dear friend. Kind regards,Thea
ImagineLoveVenus, Montana USAAug 19, 2014
It is hard to comment on this write Whisper, as my feelings are somewhere over the moon and words fail me, I am just at peace smiling at the beauty of thoughts penned! "time is endless in holding to dreams"
123whisperOPMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaAug 20, 2014
ImagineLove;It is hard to comment on this write Whisper, as my feelings are somewhere over the moon and words fail me, I am just at peace smiling at the beauty of thoughts penned! "time is endless in holding to dreams" hug
Dear ImagineLove;greatly appreciate your very kind comment;thank you
holds a treasure of growth And our heart knows no rest As for lovers who wait for each other Time is endless in holding to dreams
very nice poem
123whisperOPMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaAug 20, 2014
Dear sevenseasredwine;greatly apprecite your kind comment Thank you. I like to share the quote I like; "In love you must... Risk more than others think is safe. Care more than others think is wise. Dream more than others think is practical. Expect more than others think is possible." Kendra Brown P.S. The most true "love" poetry create a vision of utopia, a sense of perfection,while in reality, true love isn't about perfection, but rather imperfection. Kind regards,Thea
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandAug 20, 2014
Lovely poem whusper,beautiful thoughts.Loved these two lines... You and I exist as butterfly of dream As bird of fate and promised spring.
123whisperOPMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaAug 21, 2014
dear Ms Paloma;thank you for stoping by and greatly appreciate your kind comment. No heart has ever suffered when it goes in search of its dreams, because every second of search is a second’s encounter with God and with eternity. Kind regards,Thea
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 21, 2014
Very well written Thea. You transport me to a different place with your beautiful imagery and with the tapestry of emotions penned. Enjoyed this very much.
123whisperOPMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaAug 21, 2014
Dear friend Poetnumber1;very sweet comment;greatly appreciate it
123whisperOPMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaAug 21, 2014
Dear candykind;greatly apprecite you stop by to take time reading my poem,thank you for kind comment and it's lovely to see you around poet corner still writing
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKAug 22, 2014
Hi Thea
Quite beautiful, you have the soul of a true poet!
Kindest regards
Bill
123whisperOPMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaAug 22, 2014
Mr Fellsman;I am truly feeling flettered and greatful for your great comliment of being true poet -this kind complinet mean more to me than if men tells me 'how good I am looking'etc. Thank you::wine:
holds a treasure of growth And our heart knows no rest As for lovers who wait for each other Time is endless in holding to dreams
wonderful and most touching piece of poetry
123whisperOPMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaAug 23, 2014
sevenseasredwine;greatly apprecite your very kind comment. I extend myself true words instead of fingers, or fingers at the tip of my words and language wants to become a skin that is dreaming of reality
I've read this and a few other of your poems.. and I have to say that they are all inspiring. Lovely poetry really.. I hope you keep posting more.- Gabriel.
Comments (26)
Played from millions of others
In numberless forms
Old love of all time reborn again
In words uttered in poems,
Dear Thea,
What stunningly beautiful poem, I happened to read that quote just the other day. Thank you for sharing.
This is such a beautiful poem,
Filled with both wisdom and love....
Superb write !!!
Kind regards Mick.
Kind regards,Thea
Dear ImagineLove;greatly appreciate your very kind comment;thank you
And our heart knows no rest
As for lovers who wait for each other
Time is endless in holding to dreams
very nice poem
Thank you.
I like to share the quote I like;
"In love you must... Risk more than others think is safe. Care more than others think is wise. Dream more than others think is practical. Expect more than others think is possible."
Kendra Brown
P.S. The most true "love" poetry create a vision of utopia, a sense of perfection,while in reality, true love isn't about perfection, but rather imperfection.
Kind regards,Thea
You and I exist as butterfly of dream
As bird of fate and promised spring.
No heart has ever suffered when it goes in search of its dreams, because every second of search is a second’s encounter with God and with eternity.
Kind regards,Thea
Quite beautiful, you have the soul of a true poet!
Kindest regards
Bill
Thank you::wine:
And our heart knows no rest
As for lovers who wait for each other
Time is endless in holding to dreams
wonderful and most touching piece of poetry
I extend myself true words instead of fingers, or fingers at the tip of my words and language wants to become a skin that is dreaming of reality
..just incredibly lovely! ty