What is your secret?

One day passing stranger come to me in rose garden
and I am out of words to describe how beautiful she is;
I couldn't take my eyes of her,feeling tenderly drowsy,
electrified and my legs refused to walk away.
She took me by the hand and said;
"Shell we dance?" so with hipnotising embraces I followed her
and ask her name;
With childish giggles she replied;
"You don't need my name to laugh with me but if you must know;
I am Love.
Take time,don't give yourself to me as full spoon of honey,
I can get full too fast and be sick.
Dance with me as if no one watching you,
Drink with me slowely as rad wine should be taken with care"

I was puzzled and question Love;
"Love,forgive me,I didn't know you're wise.
Your second name is Fire,
You burn down many houses,
and some call you Fool and Crazy.
Is there any reason in your madness ?"

Love laugh and laugh,
dancing around in collarful ferry dress,with giggles of a child,
than she gave me a tender look and spoken;
"Thrust me with all
you would normally treat with the deepest suspicion,
I will teach you all things as you must learn how to win me.
I can be difficult;need much labour and a long time.
I am Immortal,
People call me by many names,
Not everyone can understand me,
Many sufferes great pain because of me,
but do not fear me as I am life itself
when you truly live.
Give yourself to me with full heart,
I am honest,honoured me,
I give you a glims of heaven,
And if you discover my secret,
I will cure you from all ills and
wrongs,the sorrows,and the crimes of humanity,
if you allowed me to always live in you,
not some times,not for a passing moment,
but always."

Love laugh and laugh,with giggles of a child,
feeling me with the depth,delight,the ectasy,
and I couldn't resist my curiosity but ask;

"Love,what is your secret?"

Love replied gracefully;

"Endless forgiveness."
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Posted: May 2014

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sevenseasredwine
wow just wow nicest pieces of thoughts,morvelous decri
ption and what a nice paintings.
123whisper
dear sevenseas;I was still adding words to my poem and you're got me by surprise wow first in the linelaugh Thank you so much for very kind comment.hug teddybear
sevenseasredwine
And if you discover my secret,
I will cure you from all ills and
wrongs,the sorrows,and the crimes of humanity."
can some one say this untill she does not experience it,

superb.morvelous wonderfull
Girlygirl196349
Miss whisper this is one of the most beautiful poems I've ever read! I love it outstanding job!!!!bouquet bouquet gift wine
nighty70
Hey 123 a very long but also a very nice poem i like it good jobhandshake
123whisper
dear sevenseas;I am very greatful for much kind complimentshug
You're right;only love that we selflessly share around can be expressed with 'Endless forgiveness' It's gift from God/Universe trascendent true all things both great and small with one word that free us from all pain of life,from all human strugles and that one word is Love.
I like to share quote from famous Russian novelist Leo Tolstoy (1828-1910) "All,everything that I understand,I understand only becuase I love."heart beating Thea teddybear
123whisper
Dear Girlygirl;I feel much flattered and greatful for your very kind compliment;thank you hug Theaheart beating teddybear
123whisper
nighty;greatly apprecite your very kind comment and thank you for taking time to read ithug teddybear
Mizzy4
This is a delightful love poem,
Without doubt...one of your best !
Well done Thea wine
Regards Mick.

bouquet
123whisper
Dear Mick;I greatly apprecite such very kind comment.
I guess I suprised myself with this one to turn better than I expected laugh Thank you;I am very honured that you stop by and took time to read very long poem.teddybear
Kingofhearts714
thumbs up great poem
Kingofhearts714
Great poem
Kingofhearts714
Great kiss kiss
123whisper
Kingofhearts;greatly appreciate very kind comment,thank you.wine teddybear
Spartacus2012
Some lovely sentiments Whisper!

Kentip hat
123whisper
Spartacus;lovely to see you around always loyal with giving positive feed back;much appreciate it teddybear
Poetnumber1
Beautifully penned. Loved the concept and the ending just sums it up nicely. Great job.hug
123whisper
dear friend Poetnumber1; kind compliment coming from writer of many Masterpeace writen poems is great boost for my humble person and greatly apprecited wine -Thea teddybear
lindsyjones
A most beautiful write ny friend.

A very original even. Intense abd captivating. The many ways of love.

Thanks my dear friend and love you, too.

Always

Your friend

Phyllis
darkhorse555
very beautifully crafted piece of writing dear friendangel grin
123whisper
my dearest friend lindsyjones(Phillis);it's wonderful to see you around;thank you for taking time to read my long poem and glad you like it;thank you for kind commenthug You're always in my thoughts praying for your good health;love youbouquet
123whisper
dear friend darkhorse(Liam);much apprecite your kind comment wine Someone recently compered our witing stile of poemslaugh and I am taking it as a very nice compliment as I consider your poetry very romantic - exceptionaly beautiful masterpeace.Thanks for stoping by and taking time to read my Poem teddybear
bungallow55
My gosh,

Lady you should be publishing your work

to get pay...but this is art, and art is for us

to keep.cool cheers
Joseph1112
Outstanding write dear sister Thea, quite a pleasure to read this, must read again, awesome! Joseph.applause hug bouquet
soulgoddess
wave laugh cool

Wow! dear whisper, this is SO COOL!
It's always inspiring to write from a different angle.
It gives you a new perspective.

Take Care

teddybear bouquet
gnj4u
Hi, 123whisper,
I will cure you from all ills and wrongs, the sorrows, and the crimes of humanity, if you allowed me to always live in you… Oh, if only we could all consider and embrace the power of Love. Thank you for sharing.
123whisper
Dear brother Joseph;greatly apprecite your very kind commentwine It's pleasure to see you around.-Theateddybear
123whisper
dear friend soulgoddes;wowow it's lovely to get different points of feed back cheering Greatly appreciate your very kind commenthug
-Thea teddybear
123whisper
dear gnj4u;I think when we live with Love in our heart it can help us to understand our own limitations and to go beyond and above heart beatingGreatly apprecite your very kind commenthug -Thea teddybear
soulgoddess
teddybear daydream

Thank you for your kind response and encouraging words ;)
Blessings
angel
123whisper
dear friend soulgoddes;you're very welcome hug I think thanks to all good will people who share the light of encouragment to one another,light beams more brightly than ever so thank you for sharing your spirit light teddybear
fjamesj9701
That my Dear Whisper is super star fantastic.. Very wise and powerful also a pleasure to read. Much love and cheers …Jessewine
rapturecapture
Hi Whispers

I really loved reading your wonderful poem...Stunning

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxxhug bouquet angel wave
123whisper
Dear Jesse,it's quite wodnerful compliment to hear positive feed back from one of great poets on CS.Thank you,much apprecite your kind comment teddybear
123whisper
Dear MS Martina,lovely to have you around and greatly apprcite your kind comment -thank you teddybear
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