Missing you

by Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California, USA

Jun 2014 705 Views 25 comments

Missing you

Author: Girlygirl196349

Yes I'm feelin sad
Maybe even blue
as I sit and stare
I think of you
I need someone to care
Need a listening ear
I have this fear
It's a lot to bare
Pretending not to care
While shedding a tear
It's tearing at my heart
I feel like its being ripped out
No doubt
I was really trying
To make a new start
Will I ever find a man
Who I can
Love
Trust
even lust
Not have it all turn to dust

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Posted: Jun 2014

About this poem:

Just a thought

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Comments (25)

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandJun 12, 2014

I hope you find him Laura !
Regards Mick.

Joseph1112Brampton, Ontario CanadaJun 12, 2014

Hi dear Laura, kind of sad, this one, hope ur ok don't lose hope sometimes when we stop searching frantically and waiting with bated breath here he/she comes out of nowhere... He's on his way! J

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAJun 12, 2014

True love can be elusive..Honest write Laura..

Ken

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 12, 2014

O k thank you for the lovely comment I know it's sad I will feel sorry for myself for today tomorrow brings a new day thank you again

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 12, 2014

Mick your always so kind to me ! that really means a lot to me!! Thank you SOOO much

I hope all is well on your end know my dear friend.lease know your always in my thoughts and prayers

candykidAshburn, Virginia USAJun 13, 2014

True love is in your destiny. ....

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 13, 2014

mr J thank you for the up lifting comment . You have become a very special friend that I CHEERISH

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 13, 2014

ken thank you for always leaving kind comments . You're a riot! I still cant forget your batman poem It brought much laughter to me

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 13, 2014

My friend candykid what can I say ? YOU ROCK!!! Thank you

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandJun 14, 2014

Hi Girly

I can relate to your wonderful poem...

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxx

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 14, 2014

Thank you for the lovely comment Martina :love your new profile picture you look beautiful

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 14, 2014

Jesse great to see your back!!! Thanks for the lovely comment

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJun 15, 2014

Sad but lovely Laura. Never lose hope.

benidormwellington, Wellington New ZealandJun 15, 2014

Totally relate to your beautiful poem
Laura I'm sure you of all
People will find a good man.

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 16, 2014

Poet thank you for your kind words much respect goes out to you!!

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 16, 2014

Reubein you always sweet to me ! . Thank you for you engouring comments

AADI11mumbai, Maharashtra IndiaJun 16, 2014

perfecting used of simple words

very nice

AADI11mumbai, Maharashtra IndiaJun 16, 2014

sorry i mean perfectly used of simple word

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 16, 2014

Thank you

AADI11mumbai, Maharashtra IndiaJun 16, 2014

i have poem for u

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandJun 16, 2014

really very beautifully penned deep excellent piece

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 16, 2014

Thank you so much Liam

I hope all is well with you

AADI11mumbai, Maharashtra IndiaJun 17, 2014

i want to say sorry to u that poem was not plagiarism i was listen it in one literature event i ask who tell this his say he also dnt know about it thats way i didnt write any one's name but i if u still feel i m guilty then i m ready for punishment

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 17, 2014

No punishment everyone looks out for eachother I'm blessed to have thiese wonderful friends who look out for my best interest that's all no one wants to punish you they just want you to give credit if your using someone else's poem