WHO IS HE

by Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California, USA

Jul 2014 580 Views 16 comments

WHO IS HE ?

Author: Girlygirl196349

Who is he
He has my couriousity
This man who writes beautiful poetry
He's new to me
Blinding me with poetry
Leaving me feeling like I'm on a slide
Not sure if I should run or hide
Just stay and enjoy the ride
Its given me a natural high
Could he be real
Or just another heel
Is it my heart he wants to steal
Is he looking for a free meal
I'm not even sure he's for real
I wonder what's his deal

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Posted: Jul 2014

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Comments (16)

prouddaddyrainRochelle, Illinois USAJul 21, 2014

Nice job on this one

JEANIEMACLETTERKENNY, Donegal IrelandJul 21, 2014

Trust your instincts Laura.
Go with the flow.

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAJul 21, 2014

Follow your heart Laura..

Ken

weemick1960Fife, Scotland UKJul 21, 2014

I'd be with Ken on this one Laura. Who Is he? Someone has peeked the old female curiosity. I guess you take It slow and see how the wind blows. I got Into trouble for saying that to a friend just recently. She asked my opinion. It turned Into a laugh mind you. Fun In the sun with Mike.
Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

Seriously, follow your own way Laura.

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJul 21, 2014

P D R thanks for your comment

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJul 21, 2014

Jeanie its just plain ole courisity nothing more but thanks for your lovely comment

Jaybri4uCerritos, California USAJul 21, 2014

I just love how the poem is so focused about the inquiry.
Who knows.. It might be the Lone Ranger!
Great Gwriting Girly. :0)

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJul 21, 2014

Ken knows best I believe your right on this one!,

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJul 21, 2014

Thanks for your advise mike I shall follow my heart

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJul 21, 2014

Jay thanks for your imput

maybe it's the rock coming to sweep me off my feet ! Lone ranger will do to too as long as he wears his mask

SnowCoveredMusefarmington, Maine USAJul 21, 2014

GG...

Follow your heart,
that's what poets
do anyway, right?

~SAS~

online today!

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandJul 21, 2014

Maybe happy endings ?

Best of luck,
Mick.

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJul 21, 2014

Sas and mick its nothing serious at all . Just a bit courious nothing more . Sometimes I add words just for the fill in the rhyme. But thank you both

niah9Auckland, New ZealandSep 25, 2014

This popped into my tool bar, and I smiled, thinking how many here have taken the same journey.
We have to find out, whether good or bad, better than asking later....what if I had....Nice one Girlygirl....you captured it perfectly....Kathy