Waiting

I knew you would never make me your wife
This love you can cut with a knief
But
I'm just happy you're in my life
Sometimes I sit on the floor
Patiently
Waiting by the door
Feeling like a kid
Looking
In a candy store
Always
Hoping and praying
It's you
who walks through the door
The
man that I adore
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2014

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darkhorse555
very beautifully crafted laura excellent piece of writingangel grin
JEANIEMAC
So nice to have something so nice to look forward to....
pinklady1967
I love this poem..you write similar to me..i can relate with your work.. take care.. :)
rapturecapture
Hi Girly

Really loved reading your wonderful poem...bouquet

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxxhug teddybear angel
bungallow55
Reading this poem a song by Lennon came
to my mind..."I survived long enough to make you my wife"wave
Girlygirl196349
Thank you for the lovely comment Liam hug angel wave
Girlygirl196349
Jeanie your so right it's really nice to have something to look forward to once again teddybear bouquet wave
Poetnumber1
I liked how its hope and prayer that keeps you going, never lose sight of those two essential elements for success. Nice one Laura. Have a great day ahead.
Girlygirl196349
Ms pinklady I want to thank you for your kindness it's great fully appreciated hug angel wave
Girlygirl196349
Martina as usual your kind heart shows thank you. teddybear angel wave I hope all is well
Mizzy4online today!
Bitter/sweet poem Laura,
I hope you don't have to wait
much longer !
Mick.

conversing hug
Spartacus2012
An optimistic write Laura!

Kenflower
Girlygirl196349
Poetnumber 1 thank you so much for your encouraging words. You're a very kind ,caring man. It's my pleasure to have as my poet friend . Thank you hug angel wave
Girlygirl196349
Sir mick I thank you for your kind comments as you always leave hug angel wave
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