Battle Torn

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Its so hard to say farewell
And overcome this
while feeling slightly frightened
Well now what else could I have felt
As you lay there completely still and silenced
So is there a heaven and is there a hell
Were you able to cast your demons out
Are you relieved from all their weight you felt
Or are they still pulling you down

While I'm surveying you my head hangs low
Did all of our prayers earn you a golden halo
Is there a tunnel of abiding light
I really hope that you now feel alive
Just yesterday we were kids in the fifth grade
Today I lay a warrior down inside of his grave
I want to rejoice in all the good times we've had
Instead a tear rolls down my face when I try to laugh
We're taught to suppress emotions and remove fear
But It's because of you that I am still here
I'm so proud to have served with you my friend
But it's time for you to rest now the battle ends
I will always honor your courage and sacrifice
Until we meet again someday on the other side
~ JJF~
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Posted: Jul 2014
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Painful though parting be, I bow to you as I see you off to distant clouds
~Emperor Saga~

A poem for One Bad a** Mother f**ker and please don't pardon my french

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Spartacus2012
Semper Fi my friend..I was a Navy Corpsman before college and a combat medic with the Fleet Marines at Camp Pendleton..

Regards,

Kenwriting
rarecard
Great read fjamesj9701, thank you for sharingwave
niah9
A great write Jesse, but you know deep down I wish you could move on.... but maybe it takes our own time, and we all have our own way of dealing with trauma.....this is your, sharing deep emotional poetry.....until you escape....
Perfection as always...
Kathyteddybear hug transport
fjamesj9701
Semper Fi Mr Ken and thank you my friend...
fjamesj9701
Thank you for stopping by RC and good to see you…Jesse
fjamesj9701
A great write Jesse, but you know deep down I wish you could move on.... but maybe it takes our own time, and we all have our own way of dealing with trauma.....this is your, sharing deep emotional poetry.....until you escape....
Perfection as always…

Kathy I just attended his funeral yesterday. but Im sure in time it will be ok. Maybe you didn't read the poem well and just thought it was doom and gloom without purpose but no I wrote this for a great man and war hero in my book anyways. but thanks for the advice … Jesse
Stedan
Memories resound within this poem and yes many friends have now found that peaceful rest, combative times produce many true friends without whom we may not be here, we all toil with our fears but we cannot forget those who meant a lot to us in many ways. I thank you for reminding me of my own roots.
madtat29
Condolences...a fitting rememberance friend conversing
candykid
What a tribute. A hero in real life, and now a spirit world bad a**.thumbs up
Mizzy4
Well dedicated Jesse,
It's tough to lose a friend....
It was a good thing
to remember him in a poem.

Take care........Mick.

wine
Girlygirl196349
hug hug I'm so sorry for your loss I know your military men were and still are like family comfort: teddybear teddybear sad flower
darkhorse555
top notch excellent piece of writing jesse dear friend i tip my hat palangel wine
benidorm
Jesse lovely
Dedication to your friend.
Only wars I fought were
Not in distant shores but within
And around me.
cafetwo2010
Jesse.. There are some men who will bust down hells gate for the
the cause of freedom and truth. And never flinch. Your friend
seems to be one of those men.
Cafe
Poetnumber1
Very nice dedication Skywalker. What a way to honor your friend.teddybear
Poetnumber1
Holy crap...I'm so sorry for the typo emoticon kiss my friend and no I'm not a fruit cake. laugh Typing from a tablet. doh
fjamesj9701
Always a pleasure Mr Stedan and thank you much. .. Jessehandshake
fjamesj9701
Thank you much my WCBro, and great to see you my friend. Much love … Jessebeer
fjamesj9701
Thank you Mr CK and yes always will be, thank you my friend… Jessehandshake
fjamesj9701
Thank you much Sir Mick always an honor… Jessehandshake
fjamesj9701
Thank you much Miss LGG and always my pleasure. Much love… Jesse
fjamesj9701
Always glad to see you my friend and thank you Mr LDH. Much love
fjamesj9701
Mr Benidorm thank you for your time and always still that battle within. Thank you again,,, Jessehandshake
fjamesj9701
Thank you Mr Jim and surely he was and always will be and this was his final act in showing just that. Thank you again my friend… Jessehandshake
fjamesj9701
Thank you much Sir Jedi MMPNUno1B and fruit cake or not much love my friendlaugh beer
Odette67
I will always honor your courage and sacrifice
Until we meet again someday on the other side


Dear Jesse,
This is raw, this is real, awesome writing as ever, straight from the very depth of your soul. I would never pardon your French, your French is very fitting with this poem. teddybear purple heart
lindsyjones
My dearly loved WCW brother of mine, heavy are our thoughts for those that leave us behind, but we all know, there's no other way around. Great write my darling brother
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