World of hurt

The dew glistens moist and wet,
Watering fields of unhappiness,
With Hues of blues and purple regrets,
A rainbow shines sadly in the salty mist,
In a breeze from a sea of lonliness,
So much despair hanging heavy in the air,
Saturating the things living here,
Sands of sadness make the darkest dirt,
A black and twisted twin of earth,
Like I'm stranded in this world of hurt...
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Posted: Jul 2014
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To be continued...

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Comments (22)

niah9
I know it happens, uncanny yes...
Guess we all must have similar thoughts at times.....had to check it out...K
dancing
Mizzy4
I think everyone will be able to
recognize this Tony,
Very well written......
Mick.

beer
darkhorse555
i know this place so well tony excellent write very beautifully penned dear friend angel hug
Odette67
Sands of sadness make the darkest dirt,
A black and twisted twin of earth,
Like I'm stranded in this world of hurt...


We live in a world of never ending hurt, humans killing each other just for the hell of it, I feel a great need to escape. Superb poem Tony.angel
JEANIEMAC
"A rainbow shines sadly..."
Things must be bad.
As usual, you're good.
madtat29
Thanks Kathy..great minds think alike eh..lol good seeing ya
madtat29
Heya Mick its a world all too real for many...Thanks for commenting bud cheers
madtat29
Thanks Liam..need to hijack a ship and get off this planet...transport transport transport transport
lindsyjonesonline today!
My dearest brother, a well captured suffering only burdened against the many.

Have you listened to the song, THE LA ST RESORT, by the Eagles?

Love you my brother.
madtat29
I hear that Odette...I hear ten grand makesvyou a king in borneo..lol
madtat29
Ty Jeanie...its not all bad...darkest before dawn they say conversing
madtat29
Love the Eagles...good tune..Mad love back at ya girl hug
ImagineLove
"A black and twisted twin of earth"...deep thoughts, thank you!
madtat29
Your very welcome..Thamks gor reading and commenting. ..love feedback
woodsyme
images are clearly written ty !
marikia
Yes, I agree, impressive right, and I for myself can relate, I too am stranded in the sea of loneliness, hues of blues and purple regrets are my colors - great imagery, well done! Thank you, dear poet, for sharing this gem!bouquet
SnowCoveredMuse
Madtat,

Very well said
my friend!

~SAS~hug
madtat29
Thanks woodsy!
madtat29
Hello marikia..your very welcome dear reader
madtat29
Ty SAS...preciate you stopping in
Earlgreytea
Heartfelt and mature, it takes a courageous heart to eloquently speak as you have done for me, thank you! wine
madtat29
Right on Earl...glad you like it bud wine
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