You're stunning smiles

You're a film star
to these naked crazy Irish eyes
smiling in that forever
beautiful sings out sweetly you

Take that walk with me and see
praying to give you paradise of dreams
leaving a golden warm smile
wrapped up softly under you're pillow

To touch in the gentleness of an angels hand
purity of never ending bliss
Dancing inside intoxicated with the spirits
lighting up a star
trailing in the wish of vision

One prays in happiness
magically granting dreams wishes
whisked away enchanting dancing souls
sprinkling upon a sea of air
rainbow mist bouquets your beauty complete
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Posted: Sep 2014

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Spartacus2012
Awesome romantic write Liam..

Kenwriting
niah9online now!
I agree with Spartacus.....a romantic write...but would like to add....that seems closer to realism than some......simple but beautifully sincere......Kathyteddybear
SCatlyn
How beautiful... don't know how you do it... but what a way with beautiful phrases you have, darkhorse... angel2

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candykid
There is nothing else quite like this Liam....thumbs up
soulgoddess
teddybear Sparkling imagination you have teddybear daydream joy
darkhorse555
as always ken pal wonderful comment deeply appreciatedangel grin
darkhorse555
kathy truly very beautiful comment dear friend deeply appreciatedangel wine
darkhorse555
cat thank you for your kindness beautiful comment dear friend deeply appreciatedangel wine
gnj4u
Hi, darkhorse555,
Thanks for sharing these loving images that poetically end with sprinkling upon a sea of air rainbow mist bouquets your beauty complete.
darkhorse555
christian thank you ever so kindly pal for the wonderful comment deeply appreciatedangel grin
diana_1
" Praying to give you paradise of dreams"...... wonderfully said Liam... beautiful poetry here....cheering wine
darkhorse555
angeline thank you for the dazzling beautiful comment bless youangel hug grin
Poetnumber1
This is what poetry is all about right here Liam. Fantastic penmanship. Enjoyed this very much. Do keep well.
darkhorse555
joy thank you kindly dear friend truly beautiful comment bless you angel grin
darkhorse555
diana dear pal thank you for the truly beautiful comment bless you dear friend angel grin
darkhorse555
mm dear pal thank you deeply for the dazzling beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you angel grin
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