by FergalggNorth, Antrim, Ireland
Sep 2014 558 Views 5 comments
shore line waves :)
Is it me or am I blind,
To mock others poetry is to be unkind,
I'm no genius, but to see others try,
To seem so in dept and some wanna cry,
The soul that they leach in the hidden values of interest,
The comradery the symbiont, the aspiring poetry fest,
The knowledge as deep as a flat beached wave,
solid rock is a proper poet, an ocean eats his heart, eons makes his cave.
dam...im becoming like you guys...yikkes
To mock others poetry is to be unkind,
I'm no genius, but to see others try,
To seem so in dept and some wanna cry,
The soul that they leach in the hidden values of interest,
The comradery the symbiont, the aspiring poetry fest,
The knowledge as deep as a flat beached wave,
solid rock is a proper poet, an ocean eats his heart, eons makes his cave.
dam...im becoming like you guys...yikkes
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Posted: Sep 2014
About this poem:
well..where do i start...it came to me like 5 minutes ago after i read some others...and i was like...shut the f...ck up you windgy fu..k whads...then i said...stop talking to yourself and i was like no...dont tell me what to do schizo freak....lucky i got my other 4 personalities to back me...totally kicked the shit out of myself...but in the end of the day..i won...black and blue but i won...no you didnt...yes i did...want some more...yeah...bring it....owe...ouch...no...yes...Poems entered on these pages are copyrighted by the authors who entered them. They cannot be reproduced without the author's written consent. © Copyright 2001-2024. All rights reserved.
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Comments (5)
I don't know about others, but what I write on poems I do sincerely mean...
If a person doesn't care for someone's poetry, it's my opinion they just pass it by, and it's against the policy of Poetry Corner(if it's inappropriate poetry then it should be reported to the site). Though some might like to have constructive criticism sent to them privately.
I like what I've read of your poetry - you're like me in a lot of ways - remember, or maybe you don't, about remembering something in the dictionary... but you said, or maybe that's not where you saw it. And I said that's just like me(even my mom will write me something in a letter, and then say she could be wrong, maybe it wasn't exactly that...)
So you may not remember now... cuz you're like me like that-lol (It was the Collins dictionary- about how spellings changed after King George lost the Americas...btw, I accidently said King Charles in the comment)...
Best wishes,
SCatlyn
I finally put 2 & 2 together...
Great poem!!
SCatlyn