Ahead in thought there lies a door Through which I dare to pass It says "Come take the step,go through,if you search for even more" But as I near the entrance bright,I feel the need to pause For once I go beyond that door my life will never be the same, I shall be free...of mankinds's faults and negatives that govern you and me.
Within that door I dare to dream of worlds with difference clear that offer newness to behold,matchless dreams that draw me near. Here are found no common things, described as "used to be" Only thoughts that promise change but shared by more than me.
I would make all new,leave the old,dream of better things Take up the challenge to rise above on higher thoughts as wings. For I fear not failure,not live to please the crowd that shares this world Among them all there must be one who hears the call like me
Walls must come down,rules can dissolve replaced by open minds that take the place of all we knew and shared with all mankind So join with me and take the step step through that open door for there we find the very thing the world is searching for.
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Posted: Nov 2014
About this poem:
Thinking about the world and how could be made better place.
Appreciate your reading and comment. Minds thru that door....one by one...that's what it takes.
studecarsayre, Oklahoma USANov 13, 2014
A great poem, so filled with depth of emotions. It answers conjectures of many thoughts that trouble most of us at times, do we take the step,or do we decline. I really enjoyed your poem, keep up thee great work. Larry
socrates44San Fernando, Trinidad and TobagoNov 13, 2014
Some would call this "thinking outside the box". It's a journey that must be taken to make those "matchless dreams" a reality. Magnificent Inspirational Piece!
Hi, avias, Ahead in thought there lies a door Through which I dare to pass...for there we find the very thing the world is searching for. From beginning to end, the author's write encourages all to live life with open minds and, I suspect, with open hearts. Thanks for sharing.
Many thanks to all for positive feedback/encouragement....means much!
mimzy333unknown, Washington USANov 13, 2014
very insightful my friend, sometimes confusion can leave us with out direction,but know that there is no wrong steps in this world just the out come of what we do.
Right about "doors" Leony...many kinds of doors in life require courage....peace and better world are ones we can all share.The Ferguson,Mo.issue is good example of where peace,better world is needed, hope everyone can find the right door....Keep up the writing, I enjoy reading what you share.
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Minds thru that door....one by one...that's what it takes.
I really enjoyed your poem, keep up thee great work. Larry
It's a journey that must be taken to make those "matchless dreams" a reality.
Magnificent Inspirational Piece!
Ahead in thought there lies a door Through which I dare to pass...for there we find the very thing the world is searching for. From beginning to end, the author's write encourages all to live life with open minds and, I suspect, with open hearts. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you and
It is our hearts which must open wide
~To reach the door and step outside
No one knows where that path will lead
~But we will be there we need to be.
I also enjoy your poetry...keep creating!