Surreal Poem

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Last night I dreamed
your eyes were lit
in a world of fire
your kisses struck
like heat lightning
many moons rose and fell
tides pulled the shoreline closer
you transparent as a ghost
and in the heat of this frozen night
we were still there...

You the porcelain doll
eyes that open and shut
words yet to crack
mute rain between us
eyelashes black and shiny
sitting on the edge of the mountain
with just a shallow stare...

My body gliding to you
I try and break through
waves that have become mountains
that cover the pale skyline...
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Dec 2014
About this poem:
Was it a dream?

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Comments (14)

Abby1963
The picture is gorgeous whether it was a dream or real let me say this is beautiful :tballoonsu: gingerbread santa waving reindeer snowman christmas happy snowman2 dancingsanta gingerbread
cafetwo2010
A dream of a poem bro. Love the butterfly ship.
Cafe
Spartacus2012
Thank you Abby..Hope you're having a lovely weekend!


Kencold
Spartacus2012
Thank you brother Cafe!

Kenthanks
darkhorse555
nicely painted ken excellent pen as always palangel grin
Spartacus2012
Thank you Liam old friend!

Kentyping
rapturecapture
Hi Ken


Stunning poem... loved reading

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxxteddybear hug
Spartacus2012
Thank you Martina for the lovely comment!

Kenrose
diana_1
Captivating....cheering
Spartacus2012
Thank you Shelly!

Kenflower
ImagineLove
Peyote can give such beautiful dreams brother Spartacus! That butterfly ship is real! Great visions in this write! Love it! hug wine purple heart
Spartacus2012
So true Jade..

When the men on the chessboard
Get up and tell you where to go
And you've just had some kind of mushroom...

"White Rabbit"

Jefferson Airplane..


Thanks!

Ken
candykid
I am not sure if it was a dream or not.....I do know however that I enjoyed this one Ken....cheers
Spartacus2012
Thank you brother Christian!

Kenwriting
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