Unpoetic ramble

sophiasummer

by sophiasummerNorthland, New Zealand

Sep 2015 825 Views 5 comments

Unpoetic ramble

Author: sophiasummer

There was nether time o day -
Just a gathering

The dawn dwellers

which ever portion of the earth you were spinning

It was like a crochet, whittling piece
thrown into a buffer maize

Each connecting to corridors
of brilliance

Paths of shattered lives
Ownership of the heart
Cool stuff!
Times of drunken laughter-ensqueezed
to pip and shudder

To throw yourself at emotion
does it not disintegrate
to an abstract puzzle

Of pure beauty

Wrapped in intrigue

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Sep 2015

About this poem:

To all my cohorts of many years

Soph xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Comments (5)

niah9

niah9Auckland, New ZealandSep 11, 2015

good to see you Sophia....hope life is treating you well......

Kathy

trurorob

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainOct 3, 2015

I like this Soph, nicely done in abstract style, your poetry is so underrated here, you should receive more comments.
Rob

beautifulyou

beautifulyouNew York, USAOct 3, 2015

Hi there Sophia

as always, it's good to see you

I really like this poem, but Love the last
5 lines! Wow, did you take this home!

Awesome

beautifulyou

beautifulyouNew York, USAOct 6, 2015

Hi Soph,
revisiting this beauty angel2

thank you for your gifting

sophiasummer

sophiasummerOPNorthland, New ZealandOct 7, 2015

Thank you all,
a tear though paper
a tear galloping

How yah doin!

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