The house is so silent, no men, no kids, no pets Four walls to listen to the sound of my regrets My memories they linger when I close my eyes Those wonderful days when I was so wise The cry of a baby, the sound of the door The cats, the dogs, the children Running round the floor All of them gone now, the house is so still I turn up the music the silence to kill My friends and my lovers no longer around I look at the phone it makes never a sound But all is not lost from my hopes and my dreams I sometimes imagine some magical schemes Of places to go to and great food to eat Of wonderful lovers and people to meet So silence abounds but for only a while And if I try very hard I can muster a smile Is silence a sound or a feeling inside? Tell me, I'll listen with my eyes open wide.....
Yes it is a sound. Gnawing and troubling at times. Yet peaceful and comforting at other times. I do sense a tinge of regret on your beautiful write. Reminds me of my own aloneness.
Though I still have one boy at home, I know the sounds will change soon enough. The silence will no longer be a welcome relief. Thanks for reminding me to build the strength of memories.
RedexNorthumberland, England UKDec 21, 2015
Beautiful poem indeed now you have me thinking about the sound of silence.
socrates44San Fernando, Trinidad and TobagoDec 21, 2015
Buffybear
Well written deep reflective piece!
In answer to your question: "Is silence a sound or a feeling inside?" I think it is both.
Silence has a power of its own.
"If you listen when it's still all around You will hear the very sound of silence It's the basic sound that is the background That allows other sounds their existence
Silence is a balm for the weary soul Providing peacefulness and upliftment It heals the worn spirit making it whole And fills it with deep seated contentment"
Beautiful poem which reflex's life as it is. Nothing is never lost it is just lived. Never silence your life to what it has to offer, there are always paths to walk. Have a Merry Christmas.
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I do sense a tinge of regret on your beautiful write. Reminds me of my own aloneness.
Thanks for sharing.
Well written deep reflective piece!
In answer to your question:
"Is silence a sound or a feeling inside?"
I think it is both.
Silence has a power of its own.
"If you listen when it's still all around
You will hear the very sound of silence
It's the basic sound that is the background
That allows other sounds their existence
Silence is a balm for the weary soul
Providing peacefulness and upliftment
It heals the worn spirit making it whole
And fills it with deep seated contentment"
Nothing is never lost it is just lived.
Never silence your life to what it has to offer, there are always paths to walk.
Have a Merry Christmas.