You tell me I'm free. To express what's inside of me. But when I open my mouth. And verbal bullets shoot out. The whole thing, just goes south. He's got an opinion. Oh my god, he'll slander the dominion. Quickly, put him away. Where no one will hear, what he has to say. So I am free. If I'll only be, what you want me to be. Or I'll rott away, The rest of my days, in solitary.
Blacksttud40Colombo, Western Sri LankaMay 14, 2010
A good attempt. Keep it up.
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKMay 14, 2010
Interesting write, thanks.
chuck_007OPtoronto, Ontario CanadaMay 14, 2010
Thanks for the comments.. I wish this thing had a spell checker.
opentuitKnoxville, Tennessee USAMay 14, 2010
Just type it into Word (or w/e word processing software you have), and then copy-paste it onto the CS template. That way the spelling has been checked before you try to post it.
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Best of Luck!
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