Please Ask Her To Come

Every hope... every feeling,
everything other than my last breath...
carried with her,
when she leave me.

Even in the day,
I was in the darkness.
Amongst even the thousands of people,
suffered from the loneliness.

Dear destiny... this is enough now,
ask her to come back please........
carrying the Spring to her both palms
in this obdurate Summer.

Not to bloom thousands of roses...
only for the sake of single 'red rose'
which withered because of her breakaway
though in a Spring, three years ago.

Yet I got the room reserved to her
in my heart.
To start from the place where she stopped
Destiny ... please ask her to come...
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2010
About this poem:
Another poem which created by me.. in a little hurry.

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trurorob
quite nice
rob
Blacksttud40
Thanks a lot rob
honeybemine
I sincerely hope ur destiny will return back to u.wave
Blacksttud40
Thanks Melani...
Happygolucky4u
Even in the day I was in the darkness, such a sad thought. Your poem was so beautiful I so did enjoy it.bouquet
hedistuff
sweet words blacksttud...
Blacksttud40
Thank you very much Happy.. and hedistuff ...
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