You take my time to fill an empty yours

You take my time to fill an empty yours.

You come to meet me not to stay alone.

You eat with me and say you aren't hungry,

You sleep with me and say you don't love me.


My passion is tiring for you

My thirst for life is boring for you

What do you want from me?

To take my time to fill an empty yours?

You take my soul,

But it does not fill an empty yours.
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Posted: Jun 2010
About this poem:
a poem about a shallow lover

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agoodguy2have
wow...nice write solong. sounds like what many have experienced, glad to see U writing. ;-)
dreamwolf5264
hi solong.....i guess he's afraid of love...or commitment,maybe both,this happens too much nowadays,good write-i feel the emotion.lolteddybear thumbs up
Ladybee42
very nice solong..applause
solong
agoodguy, thanks
glad to see U commenting
teddybear
solong
dreamwolf5264
"i guess he's afraid of love...or commitment,maybe both"

I do not think shallow people are afraid of love or commitment.
They are selfcentred and they do not really care of feelings of other people whom they choose "for the company".
trurorob
Strong words my Sunnn!
rob
solong
hedistuff thanks for your comment

life with no love, with no passion, with no feelings

just to fill the time...
paloma66
There are many sel-centred people who only expect but not to give their time or love for others.They use other's to meet their needs.Nice write solong.bouquet
paloma66
Sorry for the error....it should be self-centred.
poppyred
Your way of expression is so always articulate and straight on the mark.Beautiful like you.teddybear
windyweatherly
Solong, what a great direct statement. I hope he will realize how valuable your company and love that you are offering to him and return to love you the way you want to be loved..

Great write solong and thanks for sharing..teddybear
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