Rippled Reflections

crawling into my soul
dragging my heart beside it
sliding through the tears
i took comfort

and closed the door behind me

do not knock
do not ring
do not even
call out to me

i must be at rest
at peace
to turn inwards
devour the liking of me

why?

this illusive wandering creature
creeping silently through the knotted pages

must be gentle and yet so fierce

to raise my arms to all the beauty around
and then fall broken gutted upon my knees

the whispering heart
the silent soul
resting
just only resting my sweet love

I will awaken with the fascination of truth
and understanding of
eternal love and passion

this must
just be this way

glancing behind
striding away, was all that was

wiping away all pictures and tears
breathing into my body all that is

on broken plaines
and willowless forests

I greeted the sun
I bathed in the blanket of warmth
wetting my body with the silky warm waters

naked and free
hair flowing about me
reflections greeting mine eyes
come now,
and swim with me

Oh yes

We were one
finally
entwind

xx
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Posted: Jul 2010
About this poem:
awoke this morning to a beautiful day, so I guess i fell into it..

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Comments (22)

Blizza801
Dear god...I want to have your babies !!
You can use me and leave with out a reason as long as I get my moment lol !!
I love your writing...it makes me tingle.
You are gifted and should be praised daily for your.. lack of a better set of words..bad a** creative super talented i just pee'd myself a little writing skills !!!
can't wait to read more !!
aaronyambrick
I love this poem! Its so full of passion. Great work!!
agoodguy2have
sophia: I liked this, the hidden nature of it with the warm wet ending...i think blizza approves too!
Happygolucky4u
bowing Your words are enchanting. Like the sound of a beautiful song played by the sounds of the angels.bouquet
sophiasummer
wow! what beautiful comments.
I am humbled..thankyou x
Im glad you felt the passion within!
Id hoped this work reached out and consumed, as it did to me whilst i was writing.
and Blizza, you are just the sweeeeeeetest guy, blushing
hug
angel
trurorob
Gave me a hot flush Sophia!!
rob
sophiasummer
Excellent!!!
"My work is done"laugh
Hey lovely Robwave
angel
jazzy75
Beautiful and free...your poem is overflowing the brim. Love it!!
sophiasummer
Hi Gwave
Thank you so much for your lovely comments, which I always appreciate.

Sophia
xbouquet


Hi Jazzy
Oh yes it did spill over, then I swam with it..
Thank you I so enjoy your writes!

Sophia
xbouquet
serpico12
so rich and deep sophia so many pearl like lines..

crawling into my soul, dragging my heart beside it..great work as alwayswine thumbs up
gotitall
sophiasummer, beautiful, it draws you in and you want to stay there, although i think blizza, is within, ha, ha, mischief abounds today, Halloween approaches, perhaps the sprites, are active early this year.
cafetwo2010
You stir the imagination with a painful desire.. cafe
hariksna
May that mighty soul..be awakened with fascination, love and deep sense of truth...a true seeker's write...a different world you open...Thanks .....
freeatlast64847
Beautiful, and great style as always. Wonderful write Sophia! wine
sophiasummer
Sweet Serpico!
I thank you-I remember waking to a sunfilled room, and then I saw this write before me...I loved writing her.

Sophia
xx
sophiasummer
wave
Gotitall
I loved your comment!
Yes indeed strange days a ahead,
all with fun and laughter...

Sophia
xx
sophiasummer
Cafe
I'm glad you liked my write
Pain never dies
but we can replace with love and hope
A beautiful day to you...

Sophia
xx
wine
sophiasummer
Hariksna
I thank you
Many many worlds lay around us and within us,
You are write...
Bless you!

Sophia
xx
angel
sophiasummer
FAL
My cool friend!
Thank you
May your music gather melodies of sunshine and peace with laughter, and your writes marry into the tunes...

Sophia
guitar
xx
sophiasummer
I swept this poem back to you all
I have been asked to put this forward
to a poetic mag

I am a loner not sure I will

Critique is what I need

Soph
beautifulyou
I missed this before..
This is absolutely awesome Soph
It's like something you'd hear as part of a deeply passionate movie trailer lol.. seriously.

rose
sophiasummer
Just Sifting
xx
Kind of liked that one.
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