Hidden

All you see is what I want you to see,
I'm scared to let you in incase you see the real me,
The fears that I hide deep behind this great wall
Are there to protect me, incase you don't catch me if I fall.
Hold out your hands, dont hold onto my heart I'm about to fall apart
Im a part of your arms.
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Posted: Jul 2010

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Comments (9)

Danny48
Enjoyed the emotions. Very clever use of phrases.
Raw but really very good!
Thanks!
thumbs up
gardenhackle
Beautiful work, JLM!
Ladybee42
oh my god that's like the best poem i've ever read ever!
i can't believe that such a talent is hidden. you should protect your copywrite on this sweety or someone will steal it!
the emotions of it touched me in places i've never been touched before - places that were hidden! if i was a man i'd want to marry you for this poem alone......
hedistuff
very nice poem...I won't steal your words...or touch your secret parts...or marry you...seems I'm too late...
agoodguy2have
the word play is clever, the message is deep, justlittleme is well.....hidden ;-)
gnj4u
Hi, JustLittleMe,
incase you don't catch me if I fall poignantly calls out for understanding, acceptance, love of the real me. Nice write.
Redex
This is such a wonderful, clever penned poem, enjoyed readingteddybear
tomboygirl
Lovely poemteddybear
Macduff5
Your first poem on here...keep it up. well done.
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