All you see is what I want you to see, I'm scared to let you in incase you see the real me, The fears that I hide deep behind this great wall Are there to protect me, incase you don't catch me if I fall. Hold out your hands, dont hold onto my heart I'm about to fall apart Im a part of your arms.
oh my god that's like the best poem i've ever read ever! i can't believe that such a talent is hidden. you should protect your copywrite on this sweety or someone will steal it! the emotions of it touched me in places i've never been touched before - places that were hidden! if i was a man i'd want to marry you for this poem alone......
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Raw but really very good!
Thanks!
i can't believe that such a talent is hidden. you should protect your copywrite on this sweety or someone will steal it!
the emotions of it touched me in places i've never been touched before - places that were hidden! if i was a man i'd want to marry you for this poem alone......
incase you don't catch me if I fall poignantly calls out for understanding, acceptance, love of the real me. Nice write.