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surprizeme

one hand wavin' free

Then take me disappearin' thru the smoke rings of my mind
Down the foggy ruins of time, far past the frozen leaves
The haunted frightened trees, out to the windy beach
Far from the twisted reach of crazy sorrow.
Yes to dance beneath the diamond sky with one hand wavin' free
Silhouetted by the sea, circled by the circus sands
With all memory an' fate, driven deep beneath the waves
Let me forget about today until tomorrow
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Posted: Dec 2009
About this poem:
Some of Bob Dylan's best lyrics,
From "Mr. Tambourine Man"
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cheefy21

My Beautiful flower

Yes roses are red and yes violets are blue,but everytime i think of beauty.....gurl i think of you. Can you be my boo? My one special girl, girl u know u brighten my world. My o so sweet lady, i thank god that he gave me.....................you.

I promise to be true,always be there for you, Hug and hold you, Kiss you all over, be your lover and your soldier.

In return i ask for u to love me, put knowone above me, make sweet love to me and just always be there for me. You're my baby my sweet lady prettier than the reddest rose and the bluest violet. Your the girl i chose to keep me solid.
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Posted: Dec 2009
About this poem:
just being real writing to the girl of my dreams lol.
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cheefy21

"Thinking About My Love

Baby my love is true love that can never rust.
I know its love, because i know its not lust.
I know its not lust because when you are around
I feel like im going to bust, with these constant emotions
that run deeper than the deepest oceans.

When you're not around baby
my heart suffers greatly
and its only in pain for one particular lady
where's my baby?
where's my sweet sweet lady?
Damn, cant you see how im cravin you baby?

When im home alone and feelin alone
I often lay in bed thinking about my love
you are my love and there is knowone that can come above.
Damn boo, cant you see how you're treating me like a rug
by neglecting all this love?
Bottom line is i want my lady so come back to me baby.
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Posted: Dec 2009
About this poem:
writing to the girl of my dreams
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Unknown

i want your feelings

I saw her sitting by herself.
I didn't know her being.
The evening went the night grew old.
Each others eyes we were seeing.

Oh I want your feelings

A light went on inside my head.
A number in my hand.
Curiosity was in my heart.
A door to another land.

Oh I want your feelings.

Her laughter brings a smile to me.
Her hugs are my salvation.
Every time she looks at me.
It gives me illumination.

Oh I want your feelings.
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Posted: Jul 2010
About this poem:
I wrote this for a girl I met one night in a bar, got to know her, then she turned me down.
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Unknown

my wife always be like knife !!!!!

knife shine on rock,
wife shine on _ock,

life drive to dock,
with her knock.
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Posted: Oct 2010
About this poem:
hurt with her attitude
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Unknown

love is

love is like a golden chain it can link our herts together but if we ever break that chain it couald break our hearts for ever
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Posted: Nov 2010
About this poem:
its a poem that every one should remeber when falling in love and what the end result is if we fall out of love
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Unknown

WOMAN WITH THE TATOOED HANDS

I used to know this woman who had the most beautiful
tattooes on the top sides of both of her hands
She was forty-three years old and as far as I know
had never yet been with a man
It's not that she wasn't attractive;
she was beautiful, but it was the way that she interacted
She was aggresively passive to the point where she
would've intimidated any mitt that ever tried to catch it
on the right hand she had a tattooe of a nude girl
she claimed it is what God resembled
but on the left she had a mirrored image of the same female
and this one she explained looked like the devil
I remember once watching her touch her own breasts
how the tattooes smiled as they stared down her stomach
as if anticipating when they'd be allowed to caress
the sweet flower that they both seemed too hungry (sweet flower)
Now maybe I was high but it felt so right
heaven and hell both take to this woman's womb
It didn't make sense how she could commence
touching herself with me wide awake in the same room
but if I've learned anything in my years
I learned I no longer believe in surprise
but what happened next damn near stold my tears
the tattooes came alive right in front of my eyes
they both slowly stood up and climbed off her hands
and showed me why she never took some time with a man
they climbed deep inside of this woman's garden
she closed her eyes and she gently bit her bottom lip
I stepped I left and I don't regret leaving
and I'd never forget all the things I saw that evening
a glimpse of religion a piece of coming closer
to understanding more about what intrigues me most
I didn't get turned on I just got turned
I wasn't as aroused as I was concerned
for each one of em I've hurt
and every time I've been burned
I've got a lot to teach but even more to learn
so now I keep my eyes open hoping to take in all I can
about women taking in all she can
And for as long as I breathe I'll save receipt in my memory
for that woman with the tattooed hands

There's good and evil in each individual fire
Identifies needs and feeds our desire
As long as we keep our spirit inspired
She can bite her bottom lip all she wants
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Posted: Jan 2011
About this poem:
Enjoy folks, any questions or feedback much appreciated.
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DannyBoy22

In Dog Years

In dog years
I am a man
Of good intention

In dog years
I cannot be
Proven wrong
By mere fact or fiction

So every time I
Get the chance I
Wanna be wise
Like I am in dog years

Maybe someday
I could write away
On how to be the bad guy
Since I know
Oh so very well
Only time will tell
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Posted: Feb 2011
About this poem:
one of the songs me and my band are recording tomorrow
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Unknown

Jain to jain kahan

Jain to jain kahan, samjay ga kon yahan dard bharay dil ki zuban, apna bi gham hay un ka bi gham hay, ab dil k bachay ki umeed kam hay, ik kashti so toofan, jain to jain kahan
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Posted: May 2011
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cryssttyan

The Sign

Goodbye my dream, I welcome to my hope and also to my faith,
It's time to do the things, forget the dreams of what was great,
We have one life, not seven as a cat, and we deserve the most of it,
Day after day, maybe, we need to fight, and feel inside just happy, not only just a bit!

Waking up is just a moment we share each morning time,
We just are not so greatfull for each day, warm up by the sun,
We think too much about reasons, to problems or how to make a dime,
We lost the fact of being, and we forget sometime how great is having fun!

Yeah, I know that there are moments, when nothing makes sense anymore
I also feel there's so much all around, it's time to see worldwide, and open the right door
Wake up, make friends, say Hi!, and smile because you are fine ,
Today should be that day, when I love all the things around, as being all just mine!
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Posted: Jul 2011
About this poem:
As many of you, will notice , it's not about forget our dreams! It's about the moment when nothing works fine, and you just want to move on, cause it's like a bad dream what is happen' to you!
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