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I'm time

To dance, we need to rhyme
Footsteps to count the overtime
The slippery driveway was covered in slime.
The yard deck and patio aligned the grime
Indoor cooking releases the musical haim
Setting up the picnic table with drawing lime
The boots and leggings present were sublime
A melodious ringing sound made the chime
Awe, the hidden valley gave grandeur to the heim.
Catskills subordinated its beautiful thyme
Faraway cottages loomed the skyline climb
Grasshoppers leach between the prime.
Candle lanterns zoom in on the mime
Regional snacks drive a fast food dime
Beloved blowfly connects the final brime
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Posted: Apr 25
About this poem:
Just having fun with the word time.
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Partnern

you

I believe you are there,
Somewhere in the endless air,
A presence felt but never seen,
A whisper in the silent dream.

You are the gentle touch of breeze,
That rustles through the autumn trees,
The warmth of sun upon my face,
A reminder of your sweet embrace.

I sense you in the morning light,
As birdsong greets the dawning bright,
And in the starry, starry night,
Where constellations gleam with light.
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Posted: Feb 2023
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AmandaHude

Rainy Night

The rain falls gently on the rooftops,
A soft patter that never stops,
In the darkness of the night,
The raindrops shimmer in the light.

The world is hushed, the streets are still,
As the rain continues its gentle trill,
The leaves rustle in the breeze,
As the drops fall on the trees.

The air is cool, the scent is sweet,
As the rain washes away the heat,
It's a moment of calm, a moment of peace,
As the rain brings the earth release.

The sound of the rain is a lullaby,
A soothing melody, a gentle sigh,
As we lay in bed and listen,
To the raindrops on the windows glisten.

So let the rain fall, let it pour,
Let it wash away the worries of before,
For on this rainy night,
Everything feels clean and bright.
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Posted: Apr 2023
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realdeal890

True love

Rain beating like a drum against the roof of your heart the dragons are yet to depart.....

Words left to be unspoken tear our minds apart....

New years unbroken yet to be made.....

The devils a waiting yet to be paid....

The fire burns but smokes with fear....

The animal is trapped yet the hunters are near.....

The nights a come but the stars dont shine.....

When in God's true love time will a heart ever belong to mine.

P.s true love is worth waiting for always.
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Posted: Jan 2023
About this poem:
A story
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Roashard

Strive

To reach a goal that no one knows, To think the unthinkable but watch it grow, To reach a level unimaginable to the naked eye, But what is pleasurable to the natural mind. To strive to be alive oh what a time to be alive all I want to do is Strive!
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Posted: Aug 2022
About this poem:
I wrote this one night after watching the movie King Richard! Venus was about to have a big match and Serena was at the court starring at the court her dad walked up to her and told her in so many words that her hard work would pay off in due time!
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yaspark

The life cycle

A pure raw emotion
Shared a shabby shed
With a grumpy lad
And got fed up
With that

She looked for answer
In her quest
Whether she was happy
Or depressed
A funny thought
One day came by
Why not to fly?

And off she went
Into the ceiling -
And left a dent
The sea of boiling soup
Beneath
Was not to miss
She dived
Deep into the pot
And boiled and splashed…
Now fully cooked
Depressed she looked
And smelled like soup..

In her disturbed elated state
She opted to evaporate,
Precipitate,
And start anew..
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Posted: Jan 2022
About this poem:
Inspired by cooking dahl
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optimisticme

Just look!

And the past is gone, confined to history,we live for today its as far as we can see, but, history has a story to tell, it shows the future, it shows it well, because everything goes around and around, well, at least thats what I've found, so history is a part of who we are, where we go, how far!,,,, if you want to see tomorow, look back into the past, you won't be the first, and you won't be the last.
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Posted: Feb 2022
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Oceanzest

Sing along

The gnomes they're in their gnomey homes
the elves have ceased to ring
there's nothing on the radio
the kids have taken wing
Santa is a long way off
Easter Bunny's done his thing
the TV's one big disaster zone
so we just have to sing

"There's a lull in the poetry
ring-a-ding-a-ling
there's four hundred little poetry scribes
and we haven't seen a thing, Woah!"

Turning up the music now
so I can do the fling
the neighbour thinks I've lost the plot
I'm dancing in my bling
we have to get more poetry
who wants to be the King
without a little poetry
we'll just have to sing

"There's a lull in the poetry
ring-a-ding-a-ling
there's four hundred little poetry scribes
and we haven't seen a thing, Woah!"
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Posted: Aug 2021
About this poem:
la la la la la
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wayne34

Blossom

Green leaf branches stretching
The sun's glinting eye
Awake the sleeping
Barren branch
Now blossoms in the sun
Bud's open to the glow
The rays of sun
Life blossem to make
The leaf grow
Rise up into the sun
Glistens from the heat
As tears flow rain from dark skies
From pasture grow abundant
Flowers leaves of green
From seed to flower
One is one with the sun
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Posted: Mar 2021
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TearUp

YOU ARE THE MISSING PIECE

Through time past by,
Its so vain as the sky.
I'm waiting and looking,
Don't know if your coming.

But when i asked and pray
God's love showed the way!
You, my love from somewhere,
You spell the word like you care.

And yes your sincerity,
care and comfort are all free.
From a distance we know,
Our love naturally grow.

You are my soulmate,
best friend and my love oh so complete.
Please lets keep this forever,
The feeling is so deep nowhere to compare.

You complete me,
With you im so me and I feel so free.
Oh baby, I can't see tomorrow without you,
I love you so.
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Posted: Dec 2020
About this poem:
To the person who make the heart too fast.
And made everything so new!
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