optimisticme Most Commented Poems

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Winning Ways I'll put a 50 on Gazebo to win, She's a sure bet, its not a sin, At 100 to 1 I know where she's been, I really can't lose, gimme the phone till...	402	2	0	Apr 2010	Apr 2010	May 5
Oh Carol Oh Carol Its time, gotta release, gotta show, gotta rip off my shirt and go, gonna live like a caveman, and roar like a lion, Im from anot...	625	2	0	Apr 2010	Apr 2010	24 hrs ago
And The Question is? I've been reviewing the situtation, contemplating my mental state, It's been a long time coming, and I hope, not too late. The one thing that se...	431	2	0	Apr 2010	Apr 2010	Apr 30
I AINT NO QUITTER! I know I'm strong willed, of that there's no doubt, I don't give up easy, I don't mess about, And not to continue, well, its not part of my plan, I...	428	2	0	Apr 2010	Apr 2010	May 5
Casualties of Love Casualties of Love Who was that girl with her head held low, or the one crying out on the radio, who was she that averted my gaze as she wandere...	419	2	0	Apr 2010	Apr 2010	Apr 30
Separated Together He in from work, sits down, she pass's him by, a frown, she's on her way out, it's her mate, she's called, needs to see her, can't wait, He op...	563	2	0	Apr 2010	Apr 2010	May 5
Another another time, another place, another lie, another race, another first, another stand, another last, another land, another play, another say, another...	409	2	0	May 2010	May 2010	May 3
No Mans Land No mans land is here and now, I've found it easy,, I know not how,,but here I am on wasted ground,, cant get out,,, just circling round, I feel uns...	428	2	0	May 2010	May 2010	May 5

The State Of Play Whats the state of play?,, what do you say?,,,a level playing field?,, an equal connection? or something weighted in your direction? let the gam...	448	2	0	May 2010	May 2010	May 3
-She's a Winner! We drove there fast, couldn't be last, she sat on the chair, hot curlers, hair dye, cut it low?, cut it high? I dunno, you know best, want to stan...	380	2	0	May 2010	May 2010	May 5
Meltdown!??????? Lifting the veil on reality, Contemplating, preceptions, totality, seperating real from unreal, imaginary, planetry, halle berry? Slip a word i...	451	2	0	May 2010	May 2010	May 3
Stormy Winds Stormy winds arrive with force, their angry howls create discourse, batten down and stay inside, avoid its rage, from it we hide, It does increase...	488	2	0	Apr 2010	May 2010	21 hrs ago
An End To It The curse of conscience, the dread of feeling, They rip and tear at my very being, And pain and hurt I can't avoid, I can't escape, nowhere to...	531	2	0	May 2010	May 2010	Apr 26
Ah well! Got a fetish you want to come true? Say it to me I'll do it for you,,,,, I smiled and said,,I've got some of those,,,,,open your mouth and suck on...	529	2	0	May 2010	May 2010	16 hrs ago
Do you remember? Do you remember yesterday and how I loved you so? Do you remember thinking of how this love would grow? Do you remember us together saying we'd n...	426	2	0	May 2010	May 2010	May 4
Me and You! There's two, there's me and there's you, together a pair, soo interesting they stare, we talk aloud and sing in unision, a conflicting complexity...	446	2	0	May 2010	May 2010	May 2
Secretary's Memo Secretary's Memo Poets Corner will accept applications for contributions, only when all criteria is fulfilled, !: You must be constantly dru...	433	2	0	May 2010	May 2010	May 3
The Neighbours Look I was bored,,,, no excuses,,, don't know any of em really! okk,,,I forgot me meds,,,,,why are you looking at me like that?...	445	2	0	May 2010	May 2010	May 1
Gloomy Days Its not a room with a view,, there's no windows no doors, flickers of light are all that break through, spending a life alone in the dark, everythin...	407	2	0	May 2010	May 2010	May 3
Just Something! Something thats constant, that doesn't flicker or sway, That keeps its own balance in a masterful way, That holds to the truth and the way it s...	365	1	0	May 2010	May 2010	Apr 26
Driving away. Is it guilt or fear, why exactly am I here, whats the defining factor, ready to explode reaching critical,,, like a nuclear reactor, to take the ob...	419	1	0	May 2010	May 2010	Apr 23

Imprisoned The bars of steel that hold my heart wont break or bend or fall apart, there's nothing left that can get in ther're marked but strong from where...	379	1	0	May 2010	May 2010	Apr 30
Communion Just a family gathering...and it didn't rain!...	399	1	0	May 2010	May 2010	Apr 28
And then? Whoever knows what was said, in passions grasp, unruly head, tis not to wisdom I was born, or kindred spirit in other form, and time will pass an...	494	1	0	May 2010	May 2010	May 5
Code red A question mark hangs overhead, on all we've done, and all we've said, true to me or true to you, colour brown or colour blue, action stations on...	481	1	0	May 2010	May 2010	May 5
The One? Are you "the one"?, how would I know? whats the criteria that makes it so? Do I miss you when you're gone? Yes!, no matter how long, Does your smi...	627	1	0	May 2010	May 2010	21 hrs ago
One dark night I had lost my way in the darkened night, You found me alone, you shone your light, I had lost hope, I couldn't see, You showed me the way, how i...	541	1	0	Jun 2010	Jun 2010	11 hrs ago
Who told you? Who told you THAT story of life? THAT STORY cuts like a knife, a fable , you are not able , ,,, to resist,, takes over your life? And you cea...	240	1	0	Jan 2022	Jan 2022	May 3
Pink Meant to be pink, but born blue,who knew?, not me, not even you, and the whole world was green, something you could not let be seen, then the coloures...	271	1	0	Jan 2022	Jan 2022	20 hrs ago
Her Again! She never says anything wrong,she sings, soulfully and wonderfully, beautiful song, she is only two foot tall,,, he, he,,of course thats not funny,,,...	218	1	0	Jan 2022	Jan 2022	May 3
Once upon a time, a bedtime story. Once upon a time, long before creation , long before indignation was a part of it all, there was no space and there was no place, all that was, w...	237	1	0	May 2022	May 2022	May 3

Venting! And the cost of living is rising faster than the tide, We have no control, just along for the ride, I can’t go on holiday, I can’t go away, I can...	232	1	0	May 2022	May 2022	May 1
Really! Really! I don't exist in your land, you don't exist in mine, today is only passing time, Who you'll be tomorrow and what you will see, is who you really ar...	630	1	0	May 2022	May 2022	May 3
No words Daddy wont you keep me safe, daddy wont you keep me safe, Im only two, I depend on you, daddy wont you keep me safe. Daddy, please dont walk away, da...	237	1	0	Jan 2022	Jan 2022	May 4
Linear way? So we live our lives in a linear way, we are born, we live, we die, nothing more to say? First Spring, wonderful and new, then Summer appears, brings...	238	1	0	Jan 2022	Jan 2022	Apr 27
Who knows I wonderd? Is it the end of the beginning,or the start of the end,? hey, do you care? we are f*cked either way! , we are lost in contemplation, of a...	230	1	0	Jan 2022	Jan 2022	May 3
Goodnite! And all it was, was a kiss goodnite, I'll see you tomorrow, early and bright, and then I awoke, we never spoke, I left you there, sleeping tight, k...	221	1	0	Jan 2022	Jan 2022	May 3
Goodnite! And all it was, was a kiss goodnite, I'll see you tomorrow, early and bright, and then I awoke, we never spoke, I left you there, sleeping tight, k...	225	1	0	Jan 2022	Jan 2022	May 3
You were born with free will? Imagine when you were born, when you came here, you had no knowledge, nothing to fear,. it was all an adventure, a wonderous ride, ama...	254	1	0	Jan 2022	Feb 2022	May 4
Romantic or what? I could see the raindrops falling, and the comet in the sky, but there was a vision that enthralled from the corner of my eye, and I wondered was I dr...	242	1	0	Jan 2022	Jan 2022	May 3

optimisticme Most Commented Poems (360)