optimisticme Most Commented Poems

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Math or not? I've worked out the computations, even ironed out the complications, if x squared equals 2 to the power of 3, then y is you and m is me. Now that is...	423	15	0	Jan 2022	Jan 2022	16 hrs ago
Free minds! Free minds can’t see, free minds can’t be, It’s all an impossibility, freedom cannot be, There is no dictator, there is no creator, There is no fut...	283	10	0	Jun 2022	Jul 2022	Apr 22
Harmony A hand caressed a troubled mind with love and care not any kind, And troubled heart in deep despair was gently held in loving care, And nothin...	719	8	0	Jun 2010	Jun 2010	1 hrs ago
God versus Free Will If a God exists as is perceived, there's no free will, as is believed, I travel on my pre-destined ways, organised by he who says, For he woul...	677	8	0	Apr 2010	Aug 2022	19 hrs ago
Mind Story I wrote a story in my mind to comprehend what I would find, I played it out so I could see, the final outcome, what it might be, But nothing turne...	731	7	0	Jun 2010	Jul 2010	Apr 22
Short poem. In search of the hidden, the secret cavern, the lost, the forbidden, A quest through time, a journey too far, to reach the unreacheable, that dista...	711	7	0	Jun 2010	Jun 2010	10 hrs ago
Freedom of thought! Inspired by d4nI314, she will know what it means!...	459	7	0	Aug 2022	Aug 2022	Apr 17
Poets, who I walked into a world of diversity, easy to see, do you agree?, is it you or is it me? You don't like what I write?, should I stop? or ignite a new w...	396	6	0	Jul 2022	Jul 2022	Apr 24

Showing in Cinemas for a limited period! There’s no script for life! but it seems to me it seems to be, Lights, camera action all of the time, The director is YOU, it makes no sense, no rea...	240	6	0	Jun 2022	Jun 2022	12 hrs ago
Those When you view this world through a speckled lens, there's those that resist, there's those that have missed, those with a bucket list, those that live...	264	6	0	Apr 2022	Apr 2022	Apr 22
Zoom! At rush hour in any town, people race, people frown, bloody hell they'd knock you down, like soldier ants on a quest, from here to there no time to...	707	6	0	Jun 2010	Jun 2010	Apr 24
Engage! Fly the flag for love and truth, Include the old, correct the youth, Light a fire from embers cold, Forget the past and what was sold, Create...	594	6	0	Feb 2011	Feb 2011	Apr 22
OH BABY! Heart is thumping,. .........blood is pumping baby, Waiting for you ........... to get online, Hurry up now,............ dont keep me waiting bab...	697	6	0	Apr 2010	Apr 2010	Apr 22
Just feelings Why do we feel?, to see something terrible and feel the pain, see a young boy crying in the pouring rain, see lovers play and feel their joy, s...	684	6	0	Apr 2010	Apr 2010	Apr 22
If WE were God If we could recreate and start again, the creation of man,, what then?,,, so that we were God, could we produce a better plan? And IF we were God...	575	6	0	Apr 2010	Apr 2010	14 hrs ago
Life Lessons When I was young I learned some things, about life, the world and what it brings, twas then I realised, there's truth, there's ignorance, there's l...	489	6	0	May 2010	May 2010	Apr 22
The End Strange thoughts, foreign to a mind, tis not the way, not any day, but, search in vain, release the pain, no other way to find, No truth, no lie...	657	6	0	May 2010	Dec 2021	8 hrs ago
Some Questions! Who am I?, who are you?, whats the truth whats really true?, do we know ourlselves?, are we goblins,,are we elves?,,, are we real? why do we feel?...	649	6	0	May 2010	Jun 2010	Apr 24
Have A Nice Day The good the bad, the happy and sad, the worlds made up of different kinds, a collection of people with seperate minds, creating their world as the...	830	5	0	May 2010	May 2010	Apr 23
Yes You Can Reaching out for someone to help you on your way, finding its impossible to orgainise your day, absorbing all the suffering you find along the way...	474	5	0	May 2010	May 2010	Apr 11
Reward for Information! I've studied hard, worked on my mind searched the world for knowledge of every kind, I've read the masterworks of all, surveyed the planets, hea...	448	5	0	Apr 2010	Apr 2010	Apr 12

The 5 Poet Prayer. Dear Lord I need help, I cant write anymore, I need a plan, show me some talented poets to inspire me if you can, I'll include them in my writings,...	581	5	0	Apr 2010	Apr 2010	Apr 23
Wisdom takes time! I was very clever when I was younger, about 21, the world was my oyster, now those years are gone, I knew everything there was to know, I knew a...	527	5	0	Apr 2010	Apr 2010	Apr 22
A journey into Tomorrow. I take a journey every now and then, a voyage of discovery not known to many men, its a place of tranquility where one can reflect, you can come wi...	636	5	0	Apr 2010	Apr 2010	Apr 16
Life? Close you're eyes and picture joy, imagine its forever, until the day you die, now place yourself in eden and hold it deep within, would it compa...	607	5	0	Jul 2011	Jul 2011	Apr 23
Final exam! If you divide the good by the bad do you get the mad? The sad? If you multiply you and me what would you see? A host of energy? If you subtract...	271	5	0	Jun 2022	Jun 2022	Apr 24
Ask! When you ask who am I, I shall say, go away, I know you, and you know me, so, remember Your part, go away, and take it to heart, And if you come b...	265	5	0	Jul 2022	Jul 2022	16 hrs ago
For my Friend! I have a friend, dear to me, her heart is gold, her spirit free, Her trust is lost, in this poetry, To lay her heart on the line, in words and verse...	367	5	0	Jul 2022	Jul 2022	Apr 24
Space Invaders When that moment comes, before sleep invades your space, Just for an instant, you can dictate tomorrow in this place, The star of this show will be...	232	4	0	Jun 2022	Jul 2022	13 hrs ago
Senryu too! I woke up this morning, I'm glad that I did, but what a suprise!!!!!...	258	4	0	Mar 2022	Mar 2022	Apr 22
A poem with no rhyme! If you get too lost in your own sense of importance You will lose it all, you WILL cease to exist like us all, And then it’s over, and all of your...	321	4	0	Jun 2022	Jul 2022	Apr 25

I look! I look, I see, what was meant to be, But nothing is divine, nothing here makes You mine, All of our creation, and all of what You can be, It’s...	278	4	0	Jun 2022	Jul 2022	Apr 23
Games and life! Such games prevail, but sadness reigns, the Show must go on, be what they want you to be, And then, finally you see, too late, it’s over, Oh such g...	583	4	0	Dec 2022	Dec 2022	12 hrs ago
What matter anyway I never knew you, a stranger in my life, spent years together living, as bogus man and wife, No union true, no honesty, twas not the way, twas...	639	4	0	Jun 2010	Jun 2010	Apr 22
One Fine Day As I sunk beneath the waves, with nothing left to give, no thought of life or passion, no reason for to live, A loving thought embraced me, and...	615	4	0	Sep 2011	Sep 2011	Apr 24
Who Knows? Electricial stimulation creates thoughts or simulation, Fantasy or reality, beginnings or finality, Strange incoherenency or total consistancy, A...	699	4	0	Jul 2010	Jul 2010	23 hrs ago
Genesis If you could only remember who you really are, being here, so near and so far, Imagine something divided by two, then divided eternally, that's m...	272	4	0	May 2022	May 2022	Apr 23
In my world of amazing things In my world of amazing things, I see possibilites my vision brings, I create my own unique place, there's no time, there's no space, there's her...	401	4	0	Apr 2010	Apr 2010	Apr 18
Rain Rain Bloody hell, its raining again, I'm swimming in liquid H20,,,,,,dont you know, If I pray dear Lord, will you take it away just give me a minute,...	422	4	0	Apr 2010	Apr 2010	Apr 23
What do YOU see? "Are you listening?, do you hear?" "what I've said, right now, right here" yes I hear, I see your pain, I understand lifes loss and gain, did you s...	491	4	0	Apr 2010	Apr 2010	Apr 22

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