Poem Comments (2,000)

Me

Yes mick the words came from deep with inside of me . Trying to understand and to accept and learn it’s trauma that was given to me it’s not my fault it was a way for me to survive now I know why all of these crazy emotions and that you stood beside me no judgment you and I go back so so far, but I make this promise to myself and to you, it may take several months, but I’m going to write the sweetest happiest poem

RE: A Waltz with Angels.

Wow . So eloquently written and brought a lot of peace to me to read this. You touched my heart and soul a poem that I will always remember

RE: Me

Abby I would say...
I love me
I do not hate me
I need to be myself
Take those shadows and fit them in a bottle, throw it out in the ocean, so someone can bring it light.
Take care my Dear Poet. SM

RE: Dare To Dream.

I hope you find the one that can dream with you, but be careful that one does not break your heart....SM

RE: The Bonfire

A beautiful night gathering with nature, friends, food, and a Bonfire delight..... Enjoyed the read. SM

I'll Fly Away

Thank you darling is all I can now say,I am going through a terrible Phase.Pray for me.

Dare To Dream.

Thank you Addy and Mick.
Two beautiful people who I think are amazing

RE: I'll Fly Away

I am a nurse and have seen so much death and sadness.

But I have also seen so much joy, peace and miracles.

I know we are welcomed by the ones we loved.

You stand in a room with a little body lying cold on a bed, the parents gone after crying and grieving, and you look down and see just a body, but close your eyes and open your soul and you feel such a beautiful feeling of freedom and love and joy.. so I know there has to be something more that we go to.

But only when it's your time and when we no longer need to learn or teach.


Heartfelt writing

RE: Me

Sometimes we see exactly what we crave in a person so perfect for 30% of the time, we tend to overlook the 70% destruction they have over us in the hope that those odds will switch.
It's human nature to hope.

You captured that here so well.

I love you
I hate you
I need you.

One day you will feel whole with someone..

RE: A Waltz with Angels.

Deeply felt, sad and beautiful, I could see the picture and feel what you felt.
Yet the blessing is we can feel them when we need to, gone but never lost.

Thank you for giving me a memory.

RE: THE ONE YET TO BE WON

Fabulous

RE: THE ONE YET TO BE WON

So beautiful … fabulous

Messed up World

Hi Dani_290

Thank you for the read and the comment.

Sorry I missed to thank you earlier dear.

RE: The Vile and Villainous

I have NZ citizenship.... married to a Kiwi.Thank you,will check the link.

The Vile and Villainous

Hi Dear liligold76 (lily),

Couldn't sent this to you, as s message. Due to location/territory restrictions.
So I'll send the URL


BTW, Are you a native .or u've gone to NZ.
I used to have an Aunt there, but now in Aussi.

Anyways do stay blessed Always in The Lord.


Vash

The Vile and Villainous

Hi southmiami4321,

Thanks for the read and comment

Yes.definitely. we have to be careful.

Stay blessed

I'll Fly Away

Dear Oz...I'm still around but at a slower pace.Yes NZ is a beautiful place....yet it cannot erase the strong ties that bind me to my family.How are you faring? Warmest regards. Lilygold

I come to you in my dreams.

Dear Kathy it has been long in coming,my appreciation for your comment.I want you to know I deeply appreciate your comments,thank you dear.Blessings & hugs.
Lily

Hearts Throb

I seem to skim the surface of CS on & off,its my health that play up.Was going through my poems & the comments so thank you dear SM,my faithful poet friends Rob & Mick for never failing to read my stuff & leave kind comments.Blessings to all of you.
Lily

RE: Second chances

I’ve posted this poem twice I’m going to post it for the third time i’m scared because it’s raw and it says something about me so here goes

RE: Second chances

I can’ relate to your poem . I see a therapist twice a week yes twice a week . I had just had it ! So much TRAMA my whole life . It weighed me down . There were times I Couldn’t get out of bed or even eat. That trauma isn’t ours it was giving to us and we learned a way to cope, and now we have to learn our triggers, and you will see Life’s getting much better without carrying bricks on my shoulders e-mail if you ever need someone whose been there you take care . Lighten up on yourself .

RE: The Vile and Villainous

Thank you my dear,I've become too old to make a trip to Sri Lanka,even though I would love to.
Warmest regards & blessings,
Lily::heartwings:

The Vile and Villainous

Hi sweet lilygold76,

Thank you Yes. I will keep on writing.
Oh.. A biscuit pudding, pineapple gateaux and oh, those eats, I just have a knack of putting together and making (patty, bread roll, pastry etc)
It's nice you love Sr Lanka and our food.
Yes dear. We now actually get the readymade curry powders. As it's easier.
But Yes . I'll get you the quantities

Stay blessed Always

RE: Black Night

Dark moments in life are brightened with the flourishing spirit of the next day's blessings. We all struggle one way or the other. The connection with Nature gives us the strength to move forward; a lovely, heart-felt poem. SM

RE: Crying

Pent, when you lost your dear loved one who supported you, it can be devastating. Cry, cry, there is nothing wrong with that. That deepened sorrow needs to come out some way, even written words can calm your soul. Take care. SM

RE: A Waltz with Angels.

Mizzy, each one of us has a Guardian Angel sent from above. They are so close that their divine existence is felt inside our souls. Nicely penned, heartfelt poem. SM

RE: The Vile and Villainous

There are Villains out there, we just have to be smart to discover them....SM

RE: A Waltz with Angels.

Such a beautifully composed Waltz with the angels...so poignant,I feel so connected as I talk to my daughter in a golden frame,it crushes my soul each time I look at her beautiful face & ask,"why,why,why did you leave me?"I feel her so near me." In the silence of the night when the others are asleep,I gaze in agony at her picture and tears run down my cheeks.She was my most precious gem.
Thank you Mick for sharing your feelings in this amazing waltz with angels.
Blessings....Lily

RE: GOD LOVES YOU

Hi Kathy , I read this poem again and it brought me hope . I hope that you don’t mind that I took a picture of this poem I will write this down hang on my refrigerator I’m hoping a can have a picture of your beautiful poem printed out.