Poem Comments (2,000)

A lonely life

hi, yes it did but i guess i was still talking about myself, but i do not know, i thought it sounded better like this and in that context i wanted some others that feels the same to find themselves in it to :D

In the paradise of my thoughts

thank you, yes it is true

RE: God Knew What U Were Before U Had Become A Christian Celebrity

Right, interesting but not overwhelming, can you write a poem?

RE: Don't be afraid

Nice poem do we all have a angel we can call

RE: Nature determines Rhythm

Beautifully written. This is a blessing that many people do not get. That a person has a hard day’s work and has a warm home and sleeps when darkness comes and rises at the beginning of the morning. It is a blessing a lot. We must thank God for it. There are many people who are homeless and cannot get food or food. A safe place that protects them from the cold of winter. It was written wonderfully and described a normal person who has hard work, who needs what he needs, and a home that protects him from the cold of winter.

In the paradise of my thoughts

thank you so much, i apreciate that, and i apreciate you taking your time to read and comment on it

RE: I Wish I Were A Robot

A noble idea to be a robot or android for a day. Not having to experience physical or emotional pain. Not having to worry about where or what your next meal will be. However, robots or androids can never experience human love or joy or laughter. Unfortunately when we look at the reality of this world everyone is nothing but, a database of info. on a computer which is essentially a robot that holds our lives tucked away for someone or something to use against us. Everything we post on this site is saved indefinitely that CS administrators and staff could forward to any government agency if requested.
A thought to ponder.

RE: I Wish I Were A Robot

I wish I was a robot
Jaded_Raven, my dear, I do not wish for you. This robot wears out and rusts even if it is intact and in good condition. When those who made it present it, they want to get rid of it, and in the end it is in waste and scrap, and it is recycled and made into something else. As for the human being, in reality, he is immortal, even if he dies, he is immortal. He is God’s creation. He will be made in a more beautiful way than For the afterlife, the reality to which he has moved, and if he has any progress in life, it will be more valuable and precious, even if his life in this world was unsuccessful. There are things he acquired while on the journey of Umrah, such as planting a tree from which a bird ate, feeding an animal, doing a favor to a person, helping people. All of these things are permanent. Even if he dies, this is his true treasure, and he will continue to receive reward and reward for it as long as the world remains. Man is immortal, and all this inanimate object is inevitably fleeting. It is a wonderful idea to take revenge on evil people. The law will not hold him accountable. It is just a robot

distance

Jaded_Raven
So true. Very good analogy on the paradox of "distance" whether together or apart

Thank you very much ma'am, you liked it

Tranquillity

Human Interaction
Kathy
Jaded Raven

Thanks for your comments

Tranquillity

Mick

Thanks for your comment.
(see 'about this poem')

RE: Thinking about Love

Southmiami4321
Yes, you are right, my dear. I personally need a lot of courage to take the initiative, and time passes, and I also believe that life will pass. It is very good advice. Thank you for your beautiful, honest words.

RE: Games of Chance

Jaded_Raven

Yes, you described the reality exactly. This is certainly true. We must look up and not look down at our feet. You are right, my dear. Life has indeed become difficult. A person needs to close himself off.

RE: Rainbow's in a waterfall.

Lady Jewel
Yes, it is true, a beautiful and wonderful description that inspires optimism and hope

A Waltz with Angels.

Thank you Ladyjewel for your comments,
Yes, we must keep them in our thoughts and prayers.

Mick.

A Waltz with Angels.

Thank you for your kind comments SM,
Regards Mick.

A Waltz with Angels.

Thank you dear Lilygold for your kind review,
I'm glad you liked this poem.

Regards Mick.

RE: Rainbow's in a waterfall.

You paint a pretty picture here Ladyjewel ,
A good analogy for life....complete with some hard earned advice.

Mick.

RE: May

Very nice thought process Ninurta,
and your message is delivered very nicely in the verses.

Mick.

RE: Tranquillity

I would have thought that it would be sunshine all year round in your part of the world Socrates.
Lovely poem with a deep sense of calm and appreciation.

Mick.

RE: There comes a Time. ( A Re-post)

Heartbreaking lines dear Lilygold,
I hope that revisiting your poem has brought you some peace and relief from your torment.
Your pain is very evident in your words.
Best wishes,

Mick.