Poem Comments (2,000)

RE: Hugs

Ladyjewel, may Nature's world touch you dearly because just perceiving it enlightens your heart...Nice poem. SM

RE: THE FOOL

The Fool,
He takes chances, jumps in with both feet, takes a leap of faith,
Never packs much, head held high and believes in his feelings.

I think the Fool see's life and takes chances, I would rather be the Fool than the 8 of swords who misses everything because he's to scared to remove the blindfold, or the Devil who is chained by his fear not realizing the chains are loose and can be broken and is too scared to take a Risk.

RE: Inner Peace

Hello Ms. fantasy gypsy.

Nice poem.

RE: The princess of Cafe Castle

This Amazing Man was a golden knight here

He could wipe away tears, give cuddles, make you smile, make you swoon.

And he loved his Woman here to distraction.

I miss your gentle soul

RE: A New Poet

My muse so long ago, your soul was poured into these pages and is a reflection of you forever
Love you lots

RE: Our first kiss

Miss my beautiful poets, you are one, a gentle Gentleman always

RE: The Ride

Some times just being alone with no destination is so therapeutic

RE: The Girl in Me ...

Lovely to be a girl again, we forget to be a child

RE: WHO ARE YOU?

very cute
The cutest cute ever

RE: The Drow's Demise/ A song for the Black Archers

Nicely written, no Idea what they are but I googled the white haired people

RE: After the war

Yup, it always amazed me how the total contrast of that and the war was the normal.

It's like they tried so hard to block it out.

Lovely writing as usual

RE: Memories of Mom (MOM)

A mother is such a beautiful word, it holds unconditional love and hugs, you were blessed with a very special one

RE: Fuming Scales

Ah but to lay a hand on such a wonderful beast and feel the ragged breath and fire within.
That might be worth being consumed by fire.

RE: Elli's Song

A perfect little angel that never needed to be exposed to this world, a precious soul leant to us for a short time so we can feel a love so gentle and pure, we are touched by a beautiful angel and changed forever.

I have lost a child and a grandchild.
Thank you for this

RE: Grieving

*when you feel like crawling into the ground and being consumed, feel her hold your hands and pull you out, because if you think about it would She want to be there in the dark when she was so full of light*
Always hold her gently and swing her around in the sunshine she is the sunshine now for you.
Smile she sees you

Just for today

Thank you my beautiful friend.
I have been discovering myself and in doing so have been hurt and disappointed over and over again.
I have discovered that it's not everyone else, it's me, people are who they are not the perfect imperfect person you remember from forever.
That soul is so unique and special that nobody else will come up to His standard.
So until I crash into Him one day, I will continue to hold the beautiful souls in my life close and make sure they know how amazing they are, each one put into my arms to show them that they are precious and important for as long as they need me to make them realize that.
For me, the me that craves Him, that me will wait, if not in this lifetime then He will find me in the next.

Lol sorry am rambling, I tend to do that often, I miss my poets corner and the love I always find here is like a soft blanket to curl up into and just hide away from the world for this short time.
Today I needed this blanket.

RE: Just for today

Welcome back Ladyjewel, you are part of this corner always..SM

Thunder Crashing

Thank you! ~SAS

RE: Just for today

Welcome back Ladyjewel, you are part of this corner always..SM

RE: Your Heart

He is always with me Rustic.

RE: Dreaming in Silence

* takes the sounds she holds inside her heart and places her hand over his, the soft gentle music he remembers flows from her hand onto his and his fingers begin to move, the music is just to soft alone, she will always show you how to remember, close your eyes and see her*

RE: The Poet Dies

Reaches into your soul and hugs you

RE: Thunder Crashing

Absolutely beautiful and sensual, stunning words and feelings.

A perfectly penned erotic dream

RE: Eternal Strife, Endless Shadows

A mythical war as real as any, cuts through the hopes and dreams and shatters the beautiful innocents we begin with, there is always beauty and pain because we are here to learn and that's okay, but sometimes just out of the blue there is a shimmering light that calls to us, to hold onto it these days is like holding a silk rope, there's the possibility of something magical, sexy and special, and then again maybe it's not real.
Maybe it's just fantasy and not ever meant to be real.
*Leaving a kiss and a tear*

RE: I'm Lost in Hidden Melodies

*It's like searching for a ghost
Although I feel them in my soul
I follow the notes that I hear
But they disappear like melting snow*

This is just about perfect, I feel it so deeply in my soul and as you hold out your hand and begin to trust that it's real, it disappears like melting snow