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indeed, thank you so much

All American young girls:
Where does the US rank in sex trafficking?
The United States is again ranked as one of the worst countries in the world for human trafficking. According to a recently released report by the State Department, the top three nations of origin for victims of human trafficking in 2018 were the United States, Mexico and the Philippines.
Be on the look-out, everywhere you go. Be alert to your surroundings, have special devices to protect yourself, it can happen anywhere, any time.
The sad part is that children are included in this population..

Singleness for many is loneliness, but life have many things to offer, and we can give love and receive it in many ways. Nice poem. SM

Singleness for many is loneliness, but life have many things to offer, and we can give love and receive it in many ways. Nice poem. SM

yes that is true, and i apreciate that, i think that a writer must accept different point's of view from people, good and bad, because they help you write better or keep writhing as good as you can :) so thank you again

Hi dear ,

I cannot write to you directly as you've got setting restrictions on your profile.
No worries. Just thought of telling you.
So, the poem will be perfect.

Not many would say the defects of a piece of writing.

Do take care .Be happy.
Stay Blessed

hi, yes it did but i guess i was still talking about myself, but i do not know, i thought it sounded better like this and in that context i wanted some others that feels the same to find themselves in it to :D

Hi

Nice. But why it changed from I, to "you" ...?
In the latter half of the Poem.
Yes. When we learn to cope.it is easy.
Without the drama.

thank you, yes it is true

Hi

It's beautiful
But, it's sad at the end .

Anyways, thoughts and the mind play games at times....but the Most important is, to be strong to get along life's journey..

Right, interesting but not overwhelming, can you write a poem?

Nice poem do we all have a angel we can call

Springtime gives us a fresh spirit to live. Nice write. SM

Beautifully written. This is a blessing that many people do not get. That a person has a hard day’s work and has a warm home and sleeps when darkness comes and rises at the beginning of the morning. It is a blessing a lot. We must thank God for it. There are many people who are homeless and cannot get food or food. A safe place that protects them from the cold of winter. It was written wonderfully and described a normal person who has hard work, who needs what he needs, and a home that protects him from the cold of winter.

thank you so much, i apreciate that, and i apreciate you taking your time to read and comment on it

Many of our thoughts can be mind wandering or mind wondering. Our brain never stops thinking. Our moods produce happy thoughts or unpleasant ones. The environment also gives us a stimulation as we hear, see etc. Either way, our thoughts carry anxieties, regrets.
While we wander we can be daydreaming or worrying, yet when we wonder our mind takes us to think about curiosities.
You displayed here beautifully your thoughts. Intriguingly as a mind can be. Enjoyed your write. SM

All the above posts are so true, not making repetitions. For the fun of it JR, well written. Enjoyed SM

A noble idea to be a robot or android for a day. Not having to experience physical or emotional pain. Not having to worry about where or what your next meal will be. However, robots or androids can never experience human love or joy or laughter. Unfortunately when we look at the reality of this world everyone is nothing but, a database of info. on a computer which is essentially a robot that holds our lives tucked away for someone or something to use against us. Everything we post on this site is saved indefinitely that CS administrators and staff could forward to any government agency if requested.
A thought to ponder.

I know of what you speak in my soul! I wrote to make fun of the stupidity of these technocrats thinking these "robots" will replace man. It was just tongue and cheek humor. I loved your response however, I feel the same. Peace!

I wish I was a robot
Jaded_Raven, my dear, I do not wish for you. This robot wears out and rusts even if it is intact and in good condition. When those who made it present it, they want to get rid of it, and in the end it is in waste and scrap, and it is recycled and made into something else. As for the human being, in reality, he is immortal, even if he dies, he is immortal. He is God’s creation. He will be made in a more beautiful way than For the afterlife, the reality to which he has moved, and if he has any progress in life, it will be more valuable and precious, even if his life in this world was unsuccessful. There are things he acquired while on the journey of Umrah, such as planting a tree from which a bird ate, feeding an animal, doing a favor to a person, helping people. All of these things are permanent. Even if he dies, this is his true treasure, and he will continue to receive reward and reward for it as long as the world remains. Man is immortal, and all this inanimate object is inevitably fleeting. It is a wonderful idea to take revenge on evil people. The law will not hold him accountable. It is just a robot

Thank you all for the comments....Limericks' are endless fun for sure...SM

I'm Irish and I love this Limerick! Very playful!

Jaded_Raven
So true. Very good analogy on the paradox of "distance" whether together or apart

Thank you very much ma'am, you liked it

So true. Very good analogy on the paradox of "distance" whether together or apart

As we leave winter behind, there are places that it is snowing right now. When I was a young girl, watching out the window before Christmas was so exciting to see the snow gently falling on the sidewalks, trees, etc. Nicely written poem, Socrates. SM

Human Interaction
Kathy
Jaded Raven

Thanks for your comments

Mick

Thanks for your comment.
(see 'about this poem')

Niriuta, we enter the month of May. May your beloved thoughts flow into each one of us. Nice write from the heart. SM

It's that little thought "maybe the next one" that controls most people and some so much that they destroy everything for "maybe".

Southmiami4321
Yes, you are right, my dear. I personally need a lot of courage to take the initiative, and time passes, and I also believe that life will pass. It is very good advice. Thank you for your beautiful, honest words.

Flows softly but with very real feeling as usual

Thank you all for your kind comments it's appreciated.

I feel completely comfortable coming here and just writing what I feel, the writers here are lovely and warm

Jaded_Raven

Yes, you described the reality exactly. This is certainly true. We must look up and not look down at our feet. You are right, my dear. Life has indeed become difficult. A person needs to close himself off.

Lady Jewel
Yes, it is true, a beautiful and wonderful description that inspires optimism and hope

Thank you Ladyjewel for your comments,
Yes, we must keep them in our thoughts and prayers.

Mick.

Thank you for your kind comments SM,
Regards Mick.

Thank you dear Lilygold for your kind review,
I'm glad you liked this poem.

Regards Mick.

You paint a pretty picture here Ladyjewel ,
A good analogy for life....complete with some hard earned advice.

Mick.

Very nice thought process Ninurta,
and your message is delivered very nicely in the verses.

Mick.

I would have thought that it would be sunshine all year round in your part of the world Socrates.
Lovely poem with a deep sense of calm and appreciation.

Mick.

Heartbreaking lines dear Lilygold,
I hope that revisiting your poem has brought you some peace and relief from your torment.
Your pain is very evident in your words.
Best wishes,

Mick.

Oftentimes we can be our own worse critics.

People with low self esteem and poor self image are taught that by abusers. Be it emotional or physical abuse.

What is sad though many often project their anger and frustration onto others not associated with the abuse.

The worse we do is attack ourselves and impose self guilt and feelings of unworthiness to be loved and cared for.

Overall, Abby do consider you are loved and accepted by many here. Nevertheless, it's better to have one or two loyal friends than 100 empty shallow ones.

Lily, you have all your right to pour out your feelings. Losing a loved one, will always come back at moments in life. Grief does not go away, we just learn how to live with it. When we feel depressed, we have to find things that focus us to enjoy life to be able to stay on track. Beautiful heartfelt poem, my Dear Poetess. SM