Poem Comments (2,000)

Nice to be able to visit a place you want, lovely writing

How beautiful it would be if we all just took care of each other

I love day's where everything feels right lovely feeling

Makes you feel like you are there, well written and sending hugs

The thrill of a date, being healthy and happy, that's precious.
Nicely written

Lover's timeless dance
Beautiful writing

Seems like just yesterday.
Together we dance on a tight rope of faith
Love is faith

Beautifully written. Love in all its sense. Glad to see you back. SM

Eyelook4you, glad to read you are still searching for your longings. Nice write. SM

pisa, nicely expressed. I experience an early sunrise every day when I go for my morning walk. SM

Nice poem.

Hope your "long to be" come true.

Thanks for your comment Carlamee, we have had much rain, been a while since I have seen dust..

This dream is in your heart,
that is why you so wonderfully
express it here ,
Keep being inspired,

More than a hint of reality Malcolm

Manic, beautiful encounter told. There is a big CHANCE here, so let's make a final subtraction of the rest of the words. If this is in the realm of world and not a fairy tale, wish you the best.... Love does not knock at our door too often. SM

Hi Kathy

I'm so very sorry that I missed this wonderful piece when you first posted it. I absolutely love the imagery the words express and the colors you used are exquisite.

So true Yanque. I'm in with your poem all the way...SM

Nice poem.

Where I live the dust does not wait for the evenings. I can live with it or be an obsessive cleaner.

Glad you were able to make your desired trip. Belated Happy Birthday, daraloff. Maui will rise up again for sure! Take care. SM

Happy Birthday daradloff, great you went to Hawaii anyway, trip of a lifetime

Nice hopeful poem, I wish I could see the painting.

I saw it on the news.
Pockets of the world are having destruction either my natural disasters or man made.

The first one reminds of the fair I am going to tonight

Now these are beautiful, hope no AI in between. Walking with Nature is endless, hope you felt these because I did.....SM

Into arms that will forever hold me,
I belong there, I am home

that's hopeless. stop rhyming. do it without rhymes. no rhymes. got it???
ChatGPT
I apologize for misunderstanding your request earlier. Here's a non-rhyming haiku about lost love:
Love's flame extinguished,
A heart now adrift in echoes,
Tears trace the silence.

please write a haiku poem about lost love
ChatGPT
Ephemeral grace,
Love's ember fades without trace,
Heart's echo in space.

User
please do it without rhyming
ChatGPT
Fleeting love's embrace,
Memories now left to trace,
Gone without a trace.

User
you are still rhyming. don't

ChatGPT
Love's echo lingers,
Vanished paths and gentle fingers,
Aching, love now withers.

User
why don't you understand no rhymes
ChatGPT
Love's silent departure,
Aching void, a faded rapture,
Time's cruel, cold architecture.

hehe, it was a single post guys!, I'm quite fascinated by AI but its not permanent

Don't tell me AI has taken over your heart!! : SM

Just look at the world now......

Respected SM
Thanks for your comment.
You wrote it from your and experience.
I do agree your thoughts but I am trying to find.
Maybe I succeed.

This Timotie was written in 2013. Very sad but heartfelt poem. I hope you have not given up, because that is the least you should; if those are your desires. I have learned through the years that having a love is not all that life offers. I am happy being single, I enjoy my own company, sharing with others, being with family, church, music etc. I wish you the best in your findings, my dear poet. SM

Oceanzest, seems you are carrying the Sphinx on your passenger seat, it may ask you to guess one of its riddles; right there you have a challenge..... Nice intriguing poem. SM

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Carlamee
Thanks for your comment.
One can not stay alone we must search.
Maybe we get through.
Stay Safe.

Nice poem.

I know the feeling, as I myself has given up.

I'm enjoying my own company.

Deep and meaningful. Just wish the World would listen.

I play Fantasy RPG games
In one D&D setting I play a Character that is a Bard
He writes and sings about the evils he sees in an attempt to make the powers that be open their eyes to the suffering of innocents caught up in plots and schemes
But I happy you liked it

Fantasy, as Allegory...good stuff!

C'mon, mate, do something original - you're better than that!

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Sweet LadyDiamond
All your dreams come true
You become successful
Whatever you want.

Respected
Dear LadyDiamond
You're very kind.
I never give up.
When I have friends like you.
Give me courage.
Stay Blessed.