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My dear SM thank you so much reading and your comforting comments are deeply appreciated.
God bless you dear.

Such simplicity in nature yet so magical and complex. Great prose depicting that dichotomy when one looks deeply!

Excellent prose on letting go and moving on even if we are a little afraid.

thank you so much, i really apreciate that, i will try my best

Lovely share. Keep writing. SM

thank you so much, i am glad that you like it and you got the point, very good explanation, thank you so much

What a beautiful heart.

The advice is amazing ...n blessed

Stay Blessed Always

Nice...but you seem only to think of that special love .
Actually, love is all around, if we are truly loving. Family, friends are all part of the love that keeps us going.

Sometimes, that special love will never be. As it maybe just a thing of the moment for the other .
Then it would just be a memory to be forgotten.

Others will follow the path we tread,
A carpet of memories, the living thread.
Beneath their feet, our legacy lies,

This is the writer's point of view. His gaze was deep and he summed up the words brilliantly. When a person chooses the right path and endures the pain here, whoever follows this path will be crowned with success and happiness, his suffering will be reduced, and his memory will be remembered with goodness. But if he takes the wrong path, he must admit it publicly so that whoever follows this path is not destined for failure and pain, and he is also reminded of the good. If he does that, he knows that he took the wrong path in his life and does not admit it, so he misleads those who follow him and is the cause of his failure and misery. He will be remembered with evil and cursed be he who follows the same path. This is the essence of life: recognizing the truth, whether good or bad

thank you so much, i am glad that you like it, and yes that is true

Beautifully penned.

Yes. We all go the same path of departure.
Everything is temporary in life.

Your school mates are your coming to age friends and will always share a special bond. It always seems like no time passes when seeing them.

Very good. I feel your pain.

Dragonfly's --- So special --- this is a sweet write on their peril sometimes. All my children and grandchildren know never to hurt them! The Native Americans believe they come to tell you of your ancestors and if you ever notice how they sometimes will fly up near your ears ... just stand still and then in a moment they fly away! Your spirit always knows!

I am breathless with emotion on reading this passionate and endearing prose to a woman. I also write poetry of this nature but a bit shy to post them I have a private site for Lovers where I post my deepest feelings in prose of passion and love. Wonderful poet!

12qw34er56ty, your words made your dream come to life so beautifully. Your fantasies about something greatly desired, all disclosed here. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

I live close to a bay and when the rainbows appear after a heavy rain they are breathless. Gives us a feeling of peace, enjoying Nature. Nicely written, Ladyjewel. SM

The poem carries .... So weary to go on..... I know family tides are very strong, departing from them or losing them can be devastating. You are strong, Lily, and the human spirit keeps us going. May the Lord lift you up with the hope of tomorrow everlasting. Be blessed

Dear Lily,

Yes... there's a time when people feel so tired.
But, God knows the perfect time

So, enjoy the time, by reading The Bible and meditating on the Word of God.

Because, we have a time appointed. So, Be happy... there's love abounding...if we just stop and try to understand. That, keeps us going.

This is about your parents I guess...n reminiscing their life and the concern for you .
Yes. Their lives were/ are different to present generation.
Their, love and care and also lots of Angels will always be with us, to keep us going.
Beautifully penned

Just happened to look, as my country has many beautiful waterfalls

Beautiful scenario & a deep thought.
Nice

Hi dear ladyjewel

Thank you for the read...n the sweet comment.

U too, Stay blessed

A fire, dancing with fire spirits and people who care about eachother is a mixture for friendship and love, dreams and laughter.

Beautiful writing

A beautiful soul will always have true friends in life.

Well written like a hug from the past.

Beautiful, deep and magical.

If only life could be a dream.

No Manic, the wings are damaged and will never fly the same again, but she's learning to fly in a different way.


Hi Mick thank you sweet Gentleman

Great poem I’m still thinking which flower I want to be I do not t like roses but I like how they bend without breaking

Thank you so much S/m I’m going to try and put some of this mess into a bottle and throw it into the ocean excellent excellent advice my only problem is I don’t know if there’s enough bottles

Lady jewel
The I love you
I hate you
need you
Was me describing myself . Working deeply on my identity hoping all these words I write will help to heal. I will learn to deal with all of these feelings of guilt and pain thank you so much for reading and the encouragement you give to me

Yes mick the words came from deep with inside of me . Trying to understand and to accept and learn it’s trauma that was given to me it’s not my fault it was a way for me to survive now I know why all of these crazy emotions and that you stood beside me no judgment you and I go back so so far, but I make this promise to myself and to you, it may take several months, but I’m going to write the sweetest happiest poem

Wow . So eloquently written and brought a lot of peace to me to read this. You touched my heart and soul a poem that I will always remember

Abby I would say...
I love me
I do not hate me
I need to be myself
Take those shadows and fit them in a bottle, throw it out in the ocean, so someone can bring it light.
Take care my Dear Poet. SM

I hope you find the one that can dream with you, but be careful that one does not break your heart....SM

A beautiful night gathering with nature, friends, food, and a Bonfire delight..... Enjoyed the read. SM

Thank you darling is all I can now say,I am going through a terrible Phase.Pray for me.

Thank you Addy and Mick.
Two beautiful people who I think are amazing

I am a nurse and have seen so much death and sadness.

But I have also seen so much joy, peace and miracles.

I know we are welcomed by the ones we loved.

You stand in a room with a little body lying cold on a bed, the parents gone after crying and grieving, and you look down and see just a body, but close your eyes and open your soul and you feel such a beautiful feeling of freedom and love and joy.. so I know there has to be something more that we go to.

But only when it's your time and when we no longer need to learn or teach.


Heartfelt writing

Sometimes we see exactly what we crave in a person so perfect for 30% of the time, we tend to overlook the 70% destruction they have over us in the hope that those odds will switch.
It's human nature to hope.

You captured that here so well.

I love you
I hate you
I need you.

One day you will feel whole with someone..

Deeply felt, sad and beautiful, I could see the picture and feel what you felt.
Yet the blessing is we can feel them when we need to, gone but never lost.

Thank you for giving me a memory.

Many thanks Dear Lily for your lovely review on this poem. Your support is always appreciated. Hope all is well with you.

Regards Mick.

Thanks Kathy for your kind sentiments.

Regards Mick.

Very strong poem Laura,
It reads like the words just flowed into your pen. Take care.

Mick.

Lovely sentiments dear Lilygold,
I hope she got to read this piece.

Regards Mick.