Poem Comments (2,000)

lovely poem and true meanings as well

You have put my own dreams in a lovely poem

hello,
True, to be a poet shows strength of mind.
And you have a strength that people see.

Thank you for visiting me here in my second safest space.

And yet for some strange reason you sometimes wish your deepest dreams could last forever, that is the place where you are safest to be yourself without holding part of you back.
And that's the beauty of a dream, you have the power to forget the dream and move on or chase the dream and make it a reality in your own time, it's all about what's ahead of us and choosing our paths, a dream doesn't expire it's a part of you forever.

Lovely writing as always

strong!

Love can't servive without Trust, it becomes twisted and at some point it snaps.

*Two completely broken lost souls
Can still unite and try it*

Love this, Maybe we needed to be broken so we can understand how amazing it is to be loved as we are, or so I am told

Beautiful words from a beautiful Lady.

thank you

lovely poem and yes the rain cleanses the air and feeds the soil and quenches thirst of the birds. (first things your poem brought to my mind)

glad you found poetry and yes see this good poem finds more readers

I think you are right Fargo, the couplet rhyming seems to be structural, bit limiting.

Nice poem.

The rain cleans for a new dawn.

Nice poem.

thank you so much, yes that is true, and glad to hear it. thank you again

Yanque, I too felt the cool summer day of New England come alive with your words..Enjoyed SM

Beautifully written. God is with me too. SM

Wow! Now, that's far out! Over 1000 reads! I guess from an off the wall song I wrote, I'll give you the meaning of the song: "Fear lies low as Love sighs upon us" starts the intro into the days of youth, what we would recall a first love and we were invincible and everyday would last forever a day." Mischief Rules!" begins with the body of the song, the days of our teenage rebellious movement. Yet, fools that we were fell for love! "Love cries" is because nothing last forever. Along the ride you begin to know! "During the battle of wits" is the war within yourself! And you may know, before, during, and after a divorce, or going solo! "Life watches this" is the conclusion of the song. It represents the end. Knowing that once was will never leave our minds, nor will it ever be again!? And Love just smiled! lol Until then

I don't get it - a machine cannot FEEL emotion! For good poetry - you need to feel it and write from your experiences and heart! Very important ingredient that cannot be replicated by artificial means!

Kathy

i liked this one

feel for you

This is for poetry try blogs forums etc

Go direct and you will find....

Heartfelt poem Colwest. Trees are our lungs, bringing us fresh air, shade, fruits, and habitat for so many creatures. Good memories happen a lot under a tree. Nice write. SM

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54 commas, my oh my, did he use 54 commas in total in all his poems I wonder!

... but I don't recall so many commas in his poems!

Grossly overblown!

phew I'm glad to hear that LCBR!

I love your haiku,

Evocative, when so few,

words are needed, here

Not convincing. Doesn't quite have the Fitzgerald "magic"

Her queendom was never really lost it was always within the garden of her dreams.

Very nicely done.

very emotional poem Abby yes it hurts to lose a love one felt your pain in this poem

@ zest

Top TIP (typo) see above

@ zest

Top top: leave in some intentional errors in grammar/punctuation. This will show 'em the "human touch".

It's got a long way to go before it's as good as be real

F Scott Fitzgerald: 1

Chat gpt. : 0

marikia

Thanks for your kind comment.
Take Care.

carlamee

Thanks for your comment.

Yankee4you

Yes, the constructive comments and critiques by other poets were very helpful and helped us to improve our poetry skills as you mentioned.
Best Wishes to you .

Grr am on my phone and every time I put an emogi on from my phone it comes out as ?? ..
Sorry was meant to be a wave.

This is just freeking awesome ??
Your songs, the way you think and write is amazing .

Lol you are lucky I am not into women at all.

You go
And Never settle for anything less than imperfectly perfect for you

Timing is everything.
Music is essential to drown out the world, put it on pause and disappear.