You were to young to leave

by Abby1963California, USA

Jul 2022 433 Views 10 comments

You were to young to leave

Author: Abby1963

Why did you go
You left me all alone
My heart is shattered to pieces
I love you so
I raised you like you were my own
How am I supposed to live without you
I can’t think clearly
My brain in a frozen fog
You are missed greatly
You my dear little brother you forever are my best friend
There will never be another
My body aches
My head so heavy
I shed tears for us all day and night
I hope to sleep tonight
We know that will never happen
I watched you go
We were sitting there talking and
Then God came to take you home
My heart beats slow
My head hangs low
I walk through life feeling stabbing pains
I miss and love you so much
XXX

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Posted: Jul 2022

About this poem:

You were so weary
God put his arms around you
You gently slipped away
That’s the day you were taking to your new home while holding Gods hands
You didn’t go alone a part of me went too
Never good bye
Always I’ll see you later!

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Comments (10)

robrt787Somewhere, California USAJul 26, 2022

God bless you for always having a caring and loving heart.
My sincere condolences to you and your loved ones.
May your brother find rest, peace and all beautiful things in heaven.

Yes, someday we'll all see each other again in heaven.

optimisticmeathlone, Westmeath IrelandJul 26, 2022

Such love is never lost, such love is and always will be a part of you, and a part of him, and he is not gone, but , there, because he cannot cease to exist, in another form, he is there, as you will be,, my brother , my sister, and all of us just one, together forever!

timotiePeshawar, Khyber Pakhtunkhwa PakistanJul 27, 2022

Respected Abby.

Be patient and time is big healer.

One day we all have to passaway.
It's life my Dearest Lura. .

We have to live with it.

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USAJul 31, 2022

Robert, Thank you for your beautiful words

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USAJul 31, 2022

John, such beautiful and positive word they are very comforting

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USAJul 31, 2022

Timotie thank you for your truthful kind words you see to be around for me during all of my hardships and that means lot to me . Much respect to you my friend

EXRED3Northumberland, England UKJul 31, 2022

See poets corner friendships and caring i endorse all the sentiments

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USAJul 31, 2022

Exred I’ve known you for quite a long time and I consider you my friend we’ve been on this corner for many years . By no means was that comment on the the other post meant for you and sever other more . I never though for one moment that you might think you were part of it .they know who they are I’m sorry that thought I was talking about you . I will correct that comment.bad wording again my opolize

timotiePeshawar, Khyber Pakhtunkhwa PakistanJul 31, 2022

Respected Dearest
Laura.

(Timotie thank you for your truthful kind words you see to be around for me during all of my hardships and that means lot to me . Much respect to you my friend.)
You're very welcome Dearest Friend.