Dreams or reality

by Abby1963California, USA

Sep 25 549 Views 10 comments

Dreams or reality

Author: Abby1963

I laid down in my bed
My head hurt
My vision blurry
No one to hear my story
I fell asleep for two days
Woke up in a haze
was it a dream
Or my reality
No more sunshine
Dark clouds
Linger above my head
I could t seem to fit
Into this world
I couldn’t sing and dance
The laughter stuck in my throat
No more tears
Nothing left but fear
This isn’t a dream
This is my reality

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Posted: Sep 25

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Comments (10)

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandSep 26

Heartfelt poem Laura,
I'm hoping this is past tense and these feelings are now sorted.

Regards Mick.

online today!

southmiami4321Tampa, Florida USASep 27

Abby all your poems are so deeply heart-felt. Cheer up, my Dear Poet. I've been in your shoes, but the best is to come in this reality world once we wake up to challenge it. SM

salamunaDeventer, Overijssel NetherlandsSep 27

Laura, glad you are back.One day dark clouds above your head will be gone and you will
sing and dance again. Lily

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USAOct 3

Thank you for all of your comments . Depression is hard to live with sometimes .

Seth_collinsIllinois, Oklahoma USAOct 8

That's so raw and profound, Abby. Your poetry paints a vivid picture of pain, despair, and the feeling of being misunderstood. I can hear the deep emotion behind your words, and it sounds like you're going through a lot. Are you comfortable talking about it more? Can I ask if your poetry is based on your own personal experiences, or is it purely from your imagination?

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USAOct 9

Sorry to say this is from my own life .its a good way for me to get it out by writing about it thanks for your time to read my story

AhyraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaNov 6

Very descriptive dark poem. I know you are a strong woman, and I know that when you fall you always end up standing up again, Thank you for sharing this, very nice Laura, you are amazing

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USANov 9

Thank you so much Elena your comment brought tears to my eyes it’s such a pleasure knowing g you

::bouquet:

ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaNov 13

Hi Abby,
I love that you can work through this feeling by writing, everyone at some time in their lives will feel this way.
Reading about how you feel will help someone else to not feel like they are alone and that is so special.

Thank you for sharing something so personal

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USANov 13

Thank You so much. Sometimes the days and weeks can be very hard and you’re right I’m not the only one out there although sometimes I feel like I am I know my poem are sad but I m sad .
I’m write them here to get them out of my head when I write them on a piece of paper it just doesn’t feel the same Again thanks for your comment you take care of yourself

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