Who, I Wonder

Who, I wonder, in this world,
Could ever say and unfold,
Why you created me,
Or how I found you to be.

When I'm with you, it's true,
You make me feel brand new,
You saw within me,
What no one else could see.

Now I know that generosity,
Can put an end to hostility,
And I would chain eternity,
To keep my kindness faithfully.

In the service of good, I'd engage,
If I were to work in your presence,
And anything I would ever ask,
I would give to you with love and my life.

Perhaps many people don't know,
But without you, I'm hollow,
I'm like a dry desert,
Lifeless and thirsty, I revert.

And when I've been at my hardest,
I always found you, regardless,
You were wherever I've been,
You didn't discard me like waste within.

That's why I want to proclaim,
That you are my God, in name,
Not only in times of bliss,
But also in times of abyss.
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yonic although i am an atheist i can see what a beautiful formed poem this is. I did love reading it.
Maybe if you put it on poetry corner more people would appreciate it teddybear
thank you, and sorry to hear that you do not belive in God, but yes you are free to chouse what you think it best for you. and sorry but i do not know how i can do that :d thank you againteddybear sad flower
Well i do not know what comes up for you on website. You went to books just fine. On my website for this place i have forums, poetry , blogs which you are on and many more The poetry section acts much the same as this but you can read others too.
Good luck hope you find it.
thank you so much, yes i think it is called poem i will try to post it there to, thank you so muchteddybear
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