portugal
I,ve written a poem or maybe a lyric for a song.Portugal.
Portugal my lady you have given me your Algarve.
With her sunshine that brightens my day.
You have given me your people .
Who smile at me each day.
You have given me your trees and flowers
That bloom in your walm winter.
You have gaven me your houses.
Painted blue and white.
Your have given me your beutiful calming blue sea.
With sailing boats,thier white sails dance in your yellow light.
But most of portugal my darling
You have given me this man.
In his autumn years,
Happiness.
Written now 22.05 with no editing 10 september 2016.
I dedicate this to the people of portugal who I,m proad to say many are my friends.
Flyme1.
Comments (16)
This been mulling around in my subconcious for a while and it,s only just over a week ago I found blogs .
I welcome any constructive critics.It may need editing to maybe ryme for a song. I have a dream to put this to music. In my head I hear piano ,strings and panpipes or flute and wire brush on cimbols to create the sound of the sea.
Any collaberators welcome.I need a studio.
Alot of good places in Portugal
How about In the last bit "You,ve given me your calming blue sea"
and
"Most of all Portugal my lady
You have given this man,
Happiness."
Leave out "autumn years"(more is less???)
What do you think.
Iv,e edited today 5 oct ,I think it,s better.
Your comments welcome,
Flyme1.