Creative poetry thread (88)
AgentAjaxBrisbane, Queensland Australia81 Threads 1 Polls 3,965 PostsLookin4missright: buddha
fark I said it wasn’t a spelling mistake 
AgentAjax: fark I said it wasn’t a spelling mistake
ok ok 
revealer24: Once upon the time there was a large, dry oak tree standing over the cliff, watching in desperation the sun go down behind the clouds soaked in blood... and darkness fell upon his heart... there was no hope for the dawn, it was late now, far too late... the night has arrived and life's goals are gone forever... There was nothing to live for, no-one to care for... The journey had come to its end...
Yet, the dawn had arrived when a bright white dove found rest upon his branches. His soul was filled with sparks, his heart was thrilled from joy he never felt...
How long the sun will shine, I do not know... Or that the morning dew will quench the thirst of empty hearts... or the blinking stars sprinkle their lights into the darkest corners of souls...
How long?...
Life is mysterious and relationships are complicated... wounded birds falling from the sky hear: 'Go, heal each other!', and they cry: 'Don't touch my wounds! Keep away! It is hurting! and they hurl down to the ashes in pain and blood...
Slowly but surely they are drifting apart... wounds bleed and leave scars when healed... being frightened they desperately grab after the other with their sharp nails...
Why is life so complex? Why are we so hopeless when there is so much beauty around us? When there is so much to appreciate about each of us...
A year has passed and the dry oak tree that in the past in desperation
watched the sun going down had found life again... life, beautiful beyond imagination... a year that was worth waiting and hoping for, that was worth living...
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Yet, the dawn had arrived when a bright white dove found rest upon his branches. His soul was filled with sparks, his heart was thrilled from joy he never felt...
How long the sun will shine, I do not know... Or that the morning dew will quench the thirst of empty hearts... or the blinking stars sprinkle their lights into the darkest corners of souls...
How long?...
Life is mysterious and relationships are complicated... wounded birds falling from the sky hear: 'Go, heal each other!', and they cry: 'Don't touch my wounds! Keep away! It is hurting! and they hurl down to the ashes in pain and blood...
Slowly but surely they are drifting apart... wounds bleed and leave scars when healed... being frightened they desperately grab after the other with their sharp nails...
Why is life so complex? Why are we so hopeless when there is so much beauty around us? When there is so much to appreciate about each of us...
A year has passed and the dry oak tree that in the past in desperation
watched the sun going down had found life again... life, beautiful beyond imagination... a year that was worth waiting and hoping for, that was worth living...
_______________________________
Copyrighted by Revealer24 on CS
I've been so lonely out here on the farm.
How I wish I was back in your arm.
still needs work.
How I wish I was back in your arm.
still needs work.
Damianowen: I've been so lonely out here on the farm.
How I wish I was back in your arm.
still needs work.
How I wish I was back in your arm.
still needs work.
Not bad
I've been so lonely out here on the farm
How I wish I was back in your arm.
The dawg is ahowlin', my belly's agrowlin'
Not to mention I ran out of clean underwear two weeks ago
Damianowen: I've been so lonely out here on the farm.
How I wish I was back in your arm.
still needs work.
sorry Mr D,How I wish I was back in your arm.
still needs work.
did she lose other arm in farming accident
Damianowen: I've been so lonely out here on the farm.
How I wish I was back in your arm.
still needs work.
How I wish I was back in your arm.
still needs work.
well yeah, she's only got one arm so far....
and your leg is so shapely up top,
perhaps thats because you just hop...
Shell225: well yeah, she's only got one arm so far....and your leg is so shapely up top,
perhaps thats because you just hop...
perhaps thats because you just hop...
and love how the sweat wets your brow,
when your bent ova pushin that plough
Shell225: well yeah, she's only got one arm so far....and your leg is so shapely up top,
perhaps thats because you just hop...
perhaps thats because you just hop...
This poetry is crap
I think I'll take a nap
Whoever started this poetry stuff has a lot to answer for
(The funny ones are good, the others are a wee bit
)I work hard all day,
I manage two farms,
then go home to my girlfriend,
who now has two arms.
I manage two farms,
then go home to my girlfriend,
who now has two arms.
serene56: This poetry is crap
I think I'll take a nap
Whoever started this poetry stuff has a lot to answer for
(The funny ones are good, the others are a wee bit )
I think I'll take a nap
Whoever started this poetry stuff has a lot to answer for
(The funny ones are good, the others are a wee bit )
Oh did you say crap?
applause; yeah I'll clap
just one more thing
wanna show me ya map ?? ........
oh dear
now shelly is crabby
Serene is asleep
Damien is armless
and someone else is high upkeep
I really think that this site needs a LOL button - some wonderful attempts and goers here.
Keep it going please.
Cos as you can see,
you need to keep it going so you don't hear from me,
cos my poetry is crap,
It is is more like that weird rap,
It rhymes ok,
But it is otherwise dismays....
now shelly is crabby
Serene is asleep
Damien is armless
and someone else is high upkeep
I really think that this site needs a LOL button - some wonderful attempts and goers here.
Keep it going please.
Cos as you can see,
you need to keep it going so you don't hear from me,
cos my poetry is crap,
It is is more like that weird rap,
It rhymes ok,
But it is otherwise dismays....
Damianowen: I work hard all day,
I manage two farms,
then go home to my girlfriend,
who now has two arms.
I manage two farms,
then go home to my girlfriend,
who now has two arms.
"perfecto" 
Damianowen: I work hard all day,
I manage two farms,
then go home to my girlfriend,
who now has two arms.
I manage two farms,
then go home to my girlfriend,
who now has two arms.
I work hard all day,
I think of my gland,
If i don't pick up tonite,
I'll use my hand. :(
Damianowen: I work hard all day,
I manage two farms,
then go home to my girlfriend,
who now has two arms.
I manage two farms,
then go home to my girlfriend,
who now has two arms.
she cooks and she cleans
she scrubs out the loo
she has but one leg
and wears just one shoe
Shell225: she cooks and she cleans
she scrubs out the loo
she has but one leg
and wears just one shoe
she scrubs out the loo
she has but one leg
and wears just one shoe
give that one to damo Shell225: she cooks and she cleans
she scrubs out the loo
she has but one leg
and wears just one shoe
she scrubs out the loo
she has but one leg
and wears just one shoe
He fixes and adjusts
he coughs in the dust
he has but one arm
but still manages to lust.
Toffeapple: He fixes and adjusts
he coughs in the dust
he has but one arm
but still manages tolust.
he coughs in the dust
he has but one arm
but still manages to
....sorry...dust.
Shell225: she cooks and she cleans
she scrubs out the loo
she has but one leg
and wears just one shoe
she scrubs out the loo
she has but one leg
and wears just one shoe
It's not all bad news,
for that girl with half her shoes.
She can come pay my bills,
She is Heather Mills !
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