Battle of Afghan hath begun Relentless spirit of a Mater mind on end, Brilliance of the earth's best army on another, Between the unending spirit of two Lay the hopes of Eastern Mother's & West Mother's.
Afrah hath not sighted her beloved Hunger had struck her hut for long Prayers were cast with celestial strength For her child had vested hopes in future A knock on the door she felt that day Rushed to the door with unending hopes Aghast# Irfan's corpse lay breathless at her breast !
Angela monitored the news with hope A beloved was waiting in her womb Passionless days past in her calendar Suffering the hunted pain of mother hood She arouse to a ringing bell Measuring her thoughts opened the door Aghast# John hath returned in a state of coma !
Days and night hath passed in Afghan Vultures enjoyed the winter-fall profits Suffering mothers raised their head Fronting their gaze, a Grand drousy figure stood With grandeur passion it laughed and said "I am Thanatos-Demon personification of death"
war is never wonderful - just to be endured for both mothers.
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandSep 13, 2010
War causes so much pain and devastation,excellent write,sweet poet.
RedexNorthumberland, England UKSep 13, 2010
An excellant write for all, its the people that suffer all for power and money and egos, thankyou for sharing these fine thoughts
GashlyAmish Hell, Ohio USASep 14, 2010
i especially loved the line about the vultures profiting the most. as sad as that may sound...forgive me. they bring home the fallen, and we are not allowed to witness. the war for lord and land...is only glorious in the movies.
Thank you Ladybee.....deeply honoured with that Irish comment Thank you Palomaji....I have to grin...Iam a cruel poet Thank you reddex....I have to say... your comments on my poems have motivated me to write more Gashly dear....Thanks...A deep nature lover that you are....Your poems do evoke a great sense of thought...
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKSep 14, 2010
Understanding 'inevitability' of karma means you can comment without the drama Write on the crazy dance of life without the shock that increases strife... Well done for combining good writing minus the need to 'judge.' CJ
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war is never wonderful - just to be endured for both mothers.
they bring home the fallen, and we are not allowed to witness. the war for lord and land...is only glorious in the movies.
Thank you Palomaji....I have to grin...Iam a cruel poet
Thank you reddex....I have to say... your comments on my poems have motivated me to write more
Gashly dear....Thanks...A deep nature lover that you are....Your poems do evoke a great sense of thought...
means you can comment without the drama
Write on the crazy dance of life
without the shock that increases strife...
Well done for combining good writing minus the need to 'judge.'
CJ
CJ