I remember the first day, I actually set eyes upon you, Standing there by the door, You'd been waiting there patiently for hours.. Looking lost,and a bit forlorn in that old blue denim jacket.
I watched you for a few moments before I sighed deeply And made my way over and whispered,"Hey, its me".. A slow smile made its way across your worried face, As you slowly took me in and nodded.. So it is...
And all the months of waiting,the days of email And long nights spent talking ,laughing on the phone, Had brought us to this place, We went inside and, Over coffee chatted away into the night, This time face to face Never to look back.
Thanks Larry.. exactly.. and if it gives others hope.. then it was not only a pleasure to remember and write.. but inspiration for the skeptical... Peace and Luv...
As any ones life and experiences, it helps us to become wiser, and inspires others to do so as well, as somone who moves you, leaves a mark within you, and something that you can Cherish, if nothing more than Hug, At the right moment will leave a Stain forever
Maybe i Have to "allow you" to see more or my talents , as you could have a little more Faith in me, I guess we cant believe in something we Havnt seen, and Missouri Is the Sho-Me State ha so Look Fwd to a new poem soon
shhoresHYDERABAD, Telangana IndiaAug 17, 2009
it is just out of this world!! your words are so gentle yet so potent love it..
wow this poem truely inspires me and gives me hope that online relationships can happen. I really love your wording it brings tears to my eyes and shows me what is truely in ur heart
I wanted to bring this one to the front again.. for a special friend who is having a hard time believing that online relationships can and do work.. In my case I had to end it, sadly.. but I know it could have and did work..
Lee
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKOct 7, 2010
We are both fortunate enough in our own ways to have found that it can work, Thankyou QSF......Andrew......xxx
This is of course news to me,.. because I have never blocked any countries! I get mail from Abu Dabi! (sp) but I do intend to write them and see if there is something they can do!
Comments (41)
do u write from ur own experience ?
Neat capture of a personal experience in poetic prose!
wm
so Look Fwd to a new poem soon
your words are so gentle yet so potent love it..
thank you
blessings
Lovely!
lovely to be amongst my old friends here..
i love your poems you know that
this one is good really good.
In my case I had to end it, sadly.. but I know it could have and did work..
Lee