Who Says Cyberspace Isn't Real?

I remember the first day,
I actually set eyes upon you,
Standing there by the door,
You'd been waiting there patiently for hours..
Looking lost,and a bit forlorn in that old blue denim jacket.

I watched you for a few moments before I sighed deeply
And made my way over and whispered,"Hey, its me"..
A slow smile made its way across your worried face,
As you slowly took me in and nodded.. So it is...

And all the months of waiting,the days of email
And long nights spent talking ,laughing on the phone,
Had brought us to this place,
We went inside and,
Over coffee chatted away into the night,
This time face to face
Never to look back.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2009

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Comments (41)

PassionatePoetonline today!
Hmmm? Well written as usual!
QuietStormF
Hmm? Thanks P.P..true this one.. teddybear
handsonesam
this one is expressing sometihng , its clear
do u write from ur own experience ?
QuietStormF
Sometimes I do and sometimes no..This one was about a man I met online teddybear
handsonesam
you are romantic and eomtional , this rare nowadays
thumbs up bouquet teddybear
poetengineer
as always u have true beautiful words to share with us , thanks for u
QuietStormF
Thanks Handsone.. I think..bouquet
QuietStormF
Thanks Poetengineer for your always nice comments..bouquet
wayne34
nice romatic poem hun well done
QuietStormF
Thanks..Just some thoughts about a man I met online,several years ago.. who is still and always will be a very big part of my life..teddybear
swade777
This one could've been titled: "From Cyber-Space to Your Place"

Neat capture of a personal experience in poetic prose!
QuietStormF
Thanks I like it.. or who says Cyberspace isn't real? hmm.. may chang it now.. teddybear
swade777
did someone inspire that title change? :-)
QuietStormF
hmmm.. I wonder? teddybear
walkerman
VERY NICE QuietStormF. I LIKED IT.
wm
QuietStormF
I'm glad you liked wm..teddybear
HotrodLarrys
Very inspiring poem, as only within the one who writes it, but as others feel the waves of inspiration, that it takes to word thy thoughts in poetryteddybear
QuietStormF
Thanks Larry.. exactly.. and if it gives others hope.. then it was not only a pleasure to remember and write.. but inspiration for the skeptical... Peace and Luv... teddybear
HotrodLarrys
As any ones life and experiences, it helps us to become wiser, and inspires others to do so as well, as somone who moves you, leaves a mark within you, and something that you can Cherish, if nothing more than Hug, At the right momenthug will leave a Stain foreverbouquet
boyshchrm6
Very Heartwarming
QuietStormF
Thank-you boyshchrm6 .. You will need to be warmed in Barrie.. teddybear
QuietStormF
I will definately look forward to that Larry.......bouquet
HotrodLarrys
Maybe i Have to "allow you" to see more or my talents , as you could have a little more Faith in me, I guess we cant believe in something we Havnt seen, and Missouri Is the Sho-Me State ha
so Look Fwd to a new poem soonhandshake cool
shhores
it is just out of this world!!
your words are so gentle yet so potent love it..
cheering
QuietStormF
Thanks for your words of encouragement.. shhores teddybear
fareaway
never....
thank you
blessings
bouquet teddybear
Sunnn
QuietStormF
Lovely!
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sshore
yes my friend its sshore
lovely to be amongst my old friends here..
i love your poems you know that
this one is good really good.
hug bouquet hug
gypsyheart
Beautiful and romantic QuietStorm-so very well written once again.hug bouquet
QuietStormF
Yhank-you Sunn.. hug
QuietStormF
thanks.. too.. Sunn.. laugh
QuietStormF
Thanks Sshores.. and so nice to see you back my friend.. teddybear
QuietStormF
Thank-you Gypsyheart.. hug
angel2311
wow this poem truely inspires me and gives me hope that online relationships can happen. I really love your wording it brings tears to my eyes and shows me what is truely in ur heart
QuietStormF
Thanks for your comments Angel.. I know you know who this one is about.. daydream teddybear bouquet
QuietStormF
I wanted to bring this one to the front again.. for a special friend who is having a hard time believing that online relationships can and do work..
In my case I had to end it, sadly.. but I know it could have and did work..
teddybear

Lee
andrew149
We are both fortunate enough in our own ways to have found that it can work, Thankyou QSF......Andrew......xxx
QuietStormF
Oh Andrew.. I am so happy for you..applause hug teddybear Glad to hear that all is well with you... I do miss hearing from everyone from the old days.. You take good care! teddybear
andrew149
I have tried to write to you a few times my friend, but I seem to be block from here, dunno if you can do anything.......Andrew....xxx
QuietStormF
This is of course news to me,.. because I have never blocked any countries! I get mail from Abu Dabi! (sp) but I do intend to write them and see if there is something they can do! teddybear
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