A Bad Dream

by QuietStormFSouthern Ontario, Ontario, Canada

Dec 2011 1,481 Views 20 comments

~A Bad Dream~

Haunting, daunting.. perhaps merely a dream..
A myriad of not so quite silent screams..
The essense of evil.. as blasphemy coated it's ugly self
like putrid cursed words on a profanely painted shelf..
Sarcasm slithered like vile snakes on the ground..
Forked tongue,pointed directly at all who abound..
The escape route is closely guarded
No chance you will win..
Abandon all hope,
All ye that enter in.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Dec 2011

About this poem:

just something dark..

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Comments (20)

PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USADec 11, 2011

QuiteStorm,
Excellent poem. I've missed you. Happy to see you again.

QuietStormFOPSouthern Ontario, Ontario CanadaDec 11, 2011

Thank-you Pinkpoetress... yeh coming out of a bad relationship will sometimes.. cure the writer's block... anyway here's to happy endings!

QuietStormFOPSouthern Ontario, Ontario CanadaDec 12, 2011

LOL Yes it was a nightmare... all 21/2 years ..

niah9Auckland, New ZealandDec 13, 2011

isn't it a great way to vent..in an artistic way...loved it QS....beauty out of evil...good out of bad...via poetry....and a great write....Kathy

Hottbloodedsummerfield, Florida USADec 13, 2011

Reminds me of a good scarey movie that you might not wake up from.
Good job.

QuietStormFOPSouthern Ontario, Ontario CanadaDec 13, 2011

Hi and thank-you Niah.. exactly what it is.. venting.. a good way indeed to get out what it hard to express any other way..

thelmatallaGeneva, SwitzerlandDec 13, 2011

This is indeed a wonderful poetry out of a bad dream!! Thanks for sharing. Here's wishing you lovely dreams!

QuietStormFOPSouthern Ontario, Ontario CanadaDec 14, 2011

Thank-you Hotblooded.

think I may have woken up just in the nick of time..

QuietStormFOPSouthern Ontario, Ontario CanadaDec 15, 2011

Thank-you gnj4u.. and yes

awakens with a bad dream. too clever..

QuietStormFOPSouthern Ontario, Ontario CanadaDec 15, 2011

thank-you Thelmatalla...they can only get better.. right?

QuietStormFOPSouthern Ontario, Ontario CanadaDec 15, 2011

sorry meant to type... Happygolucky... must remember to type in better light...

QuietStormFOPSouthern Ontario, Ontario CanadaDec 17, 2011

Thanks for your comments Lady Morgana.. kind of darker than I am used to writing.. but sometimes fun to stray from the usual...

QuietStormFOPSouthern Ontario, Ontario CanadaDec 21, 2011

I'm glad that you enjoyed itMaxeen... ..... it sure was a weight off my shoulders..as a bad dream often is.. just being able to ecpress it this way..

Q~S

WildmustangsguyNewmarket, Ontario CanadaFeb 23, 2012

This is an awesome piece of work Babe,,especially reading it after talking to you.Sadly,,most of us write best when surrounded by emotional turmoil.If we could only write like that without having to experience it.Great job,,can't wait to see your next.

QuietStormFOPSouthern Ontario, Ontario CanadaMar 3, 2012

Thanks Wildmustangsguy... glad you like it..

adjhematteson, Illinois USAMar 3, 2012

Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.

QuietStormFOPSouthern Ontario, Ontario CanadaApr 22, 2012

Thanks so much Swade for your comments.. no you wouldn't want a key to this place... agreed..

QuietStormFOPSouthern Ontario, Ontario CanadaOct 5, 2012

And thank you for commenting Adhj..

QuietStormFOPSouthern Ontario, Ontario CanadaOct 18, 2015

Happy Halloween

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Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USAOct 20, 2015

I still love this poem

I know I commented before. But words are funny. Sometimes you can read them again and again and see something different in them. So thought I would share what I seen this time. Maybe because where I am at in life right now. I thought of people who use their words to hurt. It is like a wielding a sword

they say "sticks and stones may hurt my bones but words will never hurt me" they are wrong. Words can hurt and should be chosen wisely. That is what I seen this time

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