Take Me!

I'm open now, here is my heart.
Do with it what you will.
I'm laying all out on the line,
I'm yours to save or kill.

You have my life, nothing held back,
There's no more I can give.
My life's on hold til we are one,
I need your love to live.

So take me please, I'm yours to have,
Here is my heart to hold.
I trust in you, in kindness to,
Our oneness to enfold.

I bet you think it's quite a risk,
To say the very least,
To offer self without reserve,
And chance the howling beast.

I know your tender heart is pure,
And your intentions kind,
My heart can safely open up,
I've seen inside your mind.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Sep 2010
About this poem:
Just came to me...

Added two stanzas.

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andrew149
Yes Free, sometimes the best ones do "Just come to us", I like this poem, thankyou......Andrew.
gotitall
and if she turns up as well, perfect match, nice work, free.
stareyes
Someone will come to you, if you truly open your heart. You have your "fortune "feelings" to know whether she is the right or the wrong. take what it takes, time will shows as its goes.

Keep smile Free.
Gashly
FAL, that's beautiful. and why the hell aren't you selling these to Nashville? seriously...
freeatlast64847
Thanks andrew! Yeah, a bolt from the blue...
caroljoyce
Give some to your loved ones, some to 'God' but keep the rest for you.
CJ
freeatlast64847
Thanks stareyes! Yeah still waiting and hoping...
paloma66
Oh! Free I do wish the best for you...you deserve it,nice guy you are Free.handshake teddybear
trurorob
as long as hope doesnt turn to desperation FAL, good stuff!
rob
freeatlast64847
Ray, do you have any contacts in Nashville?
beautifulyou
Very nice free! and I love the last two lines..
just lovely

bouquet
freeatlast64847
Thanks Gashly! Have no idea how to go about selling to Nashville...
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