I almost feel I shouldn't have wrote this on a blessed Sunday..
Bless you as always Jeddah!
Thank you.. Love Sophia
EtherealladyNorthern, California USANov 14, 2010
Very nice Sophia, Keep up the good work!...
Belinda
RedexNorthumberland, England UKNov 14, 2010
Another great into the unknown but! loved it
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKNov 14, 2010
Nicely told SS, thankyou for a thought provoking poem......Andrew...xxx
jaguardancerSan Ignacio, Cayo BelizeNov 14, 2010
The Scorpion is the fighter whose silent words is the two edge sword. A spirit guide that brings a very sharp pointed mesasage. Listen, listen, listen, is that the wind are a swing of the blade--------------------------------------------- I got the point.
You could be talking about any number of things, including dancing scorpions, very mcuh 'out the box'..., beware of these critters though, i've been stung a few times by them, man, the pain...
GashlyAmish Hell, Ohio USANov 14, 2010
soph! this...is...brilliant! i adore the shadows outside the box. the silent bells hanging...a need of soul, black as hell...aye, i could just rearrange your lines and it would still make sense in my mind.
and, as sir earl said...could mean a number of things...but watch out for the critters...i got stung once too...the ache is horrid. *shudders to remember* they have red glowing eyes...that's enough of a warning.
you rock, chickie, and on a sunday, too!
more of all!
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKNov 15, 2010
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Niah
The blessed curse of a poet
Sophia
xx
I almost feel I shouldn't have wrote this on a blessed Sunday..
Bless you as always Jeddah!
Thank you..
Love Sophia
Belinda
A spirit guide that brings a very sharp pointed mesasage. Listen, listen, listen, is that the wind are a swing of the blade--------------------------------------------- I got the point.
and, as sir earl said...could mean a number of things...but watch out for the critters...i got stung once too...the ache is horrid. *shudders to remember* they have red glowing eyes...that's enough of a warning.
you rock, chickie, and on a sunday, too!
more of all!
CJ