Dam It

by sophiasummerNorthland, New Zealand

Nov 2010 511 Views 7 comments

Dam It!!

So,

I could watch upon the wall

Many underground scenes

Just hope you
earth this

not heard for a while

out side the square

That's cool?
I can carry that pain

then release

gets a bit hard

got pretty outside handed

no not where you are

your path must be another road

that's sad but .......

But I will silently go

that is the only way

Just wished

You

Could have told me

Suppose that's life

Dam it...

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Posted: Nov 2010

About this poem:

who knows how much water....when hence the oneness of the locks shall rise or silently gracefully fall.... I shall only be the one to know, and there he shall stand,, loving me, finally..
Sophia

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Comments (7)

GashlyAmish Hell, Ohio USANov 16, 2010

aaaawww soph! the dam is holding but...that's cool. felt this. don't we always wish...they could have told us. and so very glad you didn't earth this, beautiful. loved it, much. he'll stand and love you, or, if not him, another. there's always one.

got pretty outside handed...superb!

more to carry:

sophiasummerOPNorthland, New ZealandNov 16, 2010

Hi Jen
Just a another poem..

xx
love Soph

GashlyAmish Hell, Ohio USANov 16, 2010

'just another'...then please, by all means...keep writing JUST another. heh.

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USANov 16, 2010

Hi, sophiasummer,
...You Could have told me Suppose that's life... Hopefully, one day the dam will break and the power of love will wash away the wall and those caught in its flow will not drown but rather be set free, together.

agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia USANov 16, 2010

sophia, indeed it is life...we've all been there, done that, some of us, many times. love the cleansing wash of emotion. ;-)

freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USANov 16, 2010

Open the flood gates! Nice write!

niah9Auckland, New ZealandNov 16, 2010

HI SS...when the flood gates open...or the dam wall breaks, don't be the small boy who sticks his finger in the whole....
..be washed in happy emotions, watery tears....of happiness...scold later......Niah